Reviews for My Curse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was... something. Honestly, it has a little potential, but your characters (and writing, as another person said) are extremely lacking in depth. This story is VERY unrealistic. No way would I sleep-let alone lose my virginity-with someone who I don't even know personally, no matter how popular or talented or whatever they are. She was abused. If your FMC was drunk, it would be a tad more believable, but she is completely sober. She needs some self-respect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story its one of my favorites by far and i was wondering what laim's songs were? amzaing short story, really:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope this story was a parody. There was no depth to the writing OR the characters. The whole thing felt shallow and silly. I kept laughing because I thought it had to be a joke. I checked your profile in case it was, but I could see no indication. All I saw was your declaration that you're "highly feminist". Well, so am I, and this story was anti-feminist. Your main character lets some guy completely abuse her and then, after he's proved what a possessive, under-evolved toglodyte he is, she takes him back. There's nothing feministic about that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liam's POV! AWESOMENESS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() there are some mistakes. likes i believe "okey" is spelled "okay" and so forth. . . quite a cute, adorable story nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot is good and this story has potential. However, the writing is somewhat weak. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEY OMG YOUR STORY WAS FABULOUSLY AMAZING AND I REALLY WISH YOU WOULD WRITE A SEQUEL! because seriously who wouldn't want one? it was just...so good..that words can't even describe how GOD like it was. I'm a healthy Christian. Church every Sunday. He's my best friend. anyway back to your story, like how much hot passionate sex did they have? I don't approve of sex before marriage but he just sounds so darn adorable i wanna stuff him in a sack and throw him in a river...wait that came out wrong...anyway BIG FAN BIG FAN! just do it. GO HANNAH MONTANA! you're my idol, I love you so much, I know where you live and everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, please do! this is an awesome story! Make his pov, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it wouold be very cool to write the storie in Lima's point of view. I will totaly help your writing to view the story from some one else. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I love it! I really want to see Liam's POV now! Please write a story from his point of view, I'm dying to read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! This story was good. A version with Liam's POV would definitely be great. I'm curious though as to why Liam went into her room that first time and the story behind that. Anyways, good job! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am in love with this story. I am seriously rooting for Liam and Sam, despite him being a total A-hole. What can I say? I am a sucker for badboys. ;) Stella |
![]() ![]() ![]() My reviews keep getting cut off / Anyways, update soon? :] ~BreakingBeauty~ |