Reviews for My Curse
Septembers chapter 5 . 10/7/2011
This was... something. Honestly, it has a little potential, but your characters (and writing, as another person said) are extremely lacking in depth. This story is VERY unrealistic. No way would I sleep-let alone lose my virginity-with someone who I don't even know personally, no matter how popular or talented or whatever they are. She was abused. If your FMC was drunk, it would be a tad more believable, but she is completely sober. She needs some self-respect.
64ShatteredButterflys chapter 7 . 2/20/2011
This was good
bumbleB825 chapter 7 . 4/11/2010
I love this story

its one of my favorites by far

and i was wondering what laim's songs were?

amzaing short story, really:)
Abrasive chapter 6 . 3/20/2010
I really hope this story was a parody. There was no depth to the writing OR the characters. The whole thing felt shallow and silly. I kept laughing because I thought it had to be a joke. I checked your profile in case it was, but I could see no indication. All I saw was your declaration that you're "highly feminist". Well, so am I, and this story was anti-feminist. Your main character lets some guy completely abuse her and then, after he's proved what a possessive, under-evolved toglodyte he is, she takes him back. There's nothing feministic about that.
KeepMiAlive chapter 7 . 3/11/2010
Liam's POV! AWESOMENESS!
Raindrops Melt Away chapter 7 . 3/8/2010
there are some mistakes. likes i believe "okey" is spelled "okay" and so forth. . .

quite a cute, adorable story nonetheless.
awaiting.rain chapter 7 . 3/7/2010
The plot is good and this story has potential.

However, the writing is somewhat weak.
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Awesome. :D
abossatross chapter 6 . 2/16/2010
HEY OMG YOUR STORY WAS FABULOUSLY AMAZING AND I REALLY WISH YOU WOULD WRITE A SEQUEL! because seriously who wouldn't want one? it was just...so good..that words can't even describe how GOD like it was. I'm a healthy Christian. Church every Sunday. He's my best friend.

anyway back to your story, like how much hot passionate sex did they have? I don't approve of sex before marriage but he just sounds so darn adorable i wanna stuff him in a sack and throw him in a river...wait that came out wrong...anyway BIG FAN BIG FAN! just do it. GO HANNAH MONTANA! you're my idol, I love you so much, I know where you live and everything.
KeepMiAlive chapter 6 . 2/6/2010
OMG, please do! this is an awesome story! Make his pov, please!
Masquerade hide your face chapter 6 . 1/29/2010
I think it wouold be very cool to write the storie in Lima's point of view. I will totaly help your writing to view the story from some one else.
AwesomenessInaCan chapter 6 . 1/22/2010
Wow, I love it! I really want to see Liam's POV now! Please write a story from his point of view, I'm dying to read it!
luvsummer chapter 6 . 1/22/2010
Hi! This story was good. A version with Liam's POV would definitely be great. I'm curious though as to why Liam went into her room that first time and the story behind that. Anyways, good job! )
HoodedStellaish chapter 6 . 1/19/2010
I am in love with this story. I am seriously rooting for Liam and Sam, despite him being a total A-hole. What can I say? I am a sucker for badboys. ;)

Stella
BreakingBeauty chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
My reviews keep getting cut off / Anyways, update soon? :]

~BreakingBeauty~
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