you made a literal twilight series in a way. but you made this way better than twilight. i loved it.

Make more chapters? Plzzzzzzzz!

*i used to b DoveyGirl 3
Sooo, make more chaps plzzzz, cuz I'll be back next week :D
Plus I'm a fan...duhh obviously so I'll be back :D

i love how u slyly sliped in the wedding preposal most people just start with the characters doing 1 thing tjen the next moment he's saying "willl you marry me?" and then straight away she says "YES!" not very believe able. Away way... i loved your story keep up the good work. xoxo

great story! i loved it! xoxo

Well, this was fun. I like the fact you stuck with traditional werewolf mythology and at the same time you made some of your own. I really liked the characters.

Olivia's personality is great because usually with characters of teenage girls in fiction, they tend to be annoying, whiny, stupid, spineless, etc. Liv was a nice change because even at the times when she was whining, it was understandable. I love the fact she's not a Mary Sue and she has her own voice.

Connor is nice. He's smug, funny, smart and he's not an overbearing jerk. Possessive yes but in a good way. I would've liked to have known more about him though, as well as Olivia. We only get a glimpse of their interests and it would've done if you've fleshed that out a bit more. The bones are good but it just need a bit more meat.

Secondary characters were great. Kitty was cute and Noah was awesome. I like that his story is continued in the sequel (I haven't read it but I will soon) and I'm curious about his Carlie. Darien and Marianne made me laugh. I like the fact that even as grown ups, they're still playful and so in love.

Overall, I liked the plot, I liked the characters and I liked the pacing (even if sometimes it felt a little rushed) though sometimes it did really feel that you focused more on the plot than character development but it's not bad. It's better that than to have neither like Twilight (shakes head). The only problem I think is that I feel a little bereft cause I want more of Olivia and Connor. I feel that this story had so much potential, it just lacked a little more development.

Anyway, great job! I enjoyed the story and I hope you keep writing because good werewolf stories are hard to find these days and aside from charliej, there mostly aren't that many good ones. So kudos to you for succeeding where many have failed.

Keep writing!

THAT WAS AWESOMELY GREAT!

MUY BUEN HISTORIA

Loved this story! :)

Pfiiiou there going to be fine.
But I've got à question, they kill hunters but what happen with the body and dont they have problem with the police ?

Thanks for sharing your story!

I would be freaking out!

Argh...I am upset to see it end. I am curious to find out more about Olivia and connor. I do hope you add more to this story. I thought it was really great and I thoroughly enjoyed it. On second thought, please don't end it, keep going with it. It reminds me of the books by Nikki Charles. I love her series and this has the same potential with spin-offs and updates. Please keep going.

I am so happy that I found this story and that I was able to get it to 380 reviews! This is amazing! I love it.

If I were her, I would have started crying at the end of this chapter. I almost did, and I'm not even in this situation!