u shd totally complete this story...It has amazing continuity..Am thinking along thingz like bryce goes 2 nathan's pack,dey continue hooking up,ultimately become mates...Jst saying

I loved the fic but I couldn't stop laughing because I have a older brother name Bryce :3

YOU ARE AMAZINGNESS.

i absolutely adore werewolf fics! and the chemistry between these two is fantastic. im definitely glad that bryce put up a fight while not being whiny and in denial. when i get a really good story but the submissive acts like that i feel a little part of my soul die. D: so yes, you did a very good job at this one-shot! plus, the sex was just yumm. i'd be squealing with joy if you'd do a companion/continuation one-shot with a day of nathan and bryce fluff!

Hot x_x I love it

awesome story. are you gonna do more like this? werewolves i mean.

I'm in too. xD

Oh! This one-shot was very good! I have always been a sucker for werewolf dominance stories! I really enjoyed reading your story!

~Bloody Peppermint

OMFG! That was so fucking hot that it's not even funny! I mean damn you like just became my new best friend! After all, us yaoi addicts need to stick together, right?

I love werewolf fics, and this is probably one of the best I've come across. Very well written, and the lemon was super-hot! Fantastic story!:D