|Reviews for Burn it,|
| The Immoralist chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
i. love. this. okay?
| i think that maybe chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
uhm cheshirecheshire :D i fucking love it haha. got back into smoking these last few weeks and yus :) love it almost as much as this haha.
i digg how you describe shit, sir! every line but these ones stood out the most: "i watch the smoke float up through my eyelashes." "talking and exhaling in her frustration" you set things up wonderfully and i swear i know these people.
the concept: burning your past. forgetting it ever existed... just.. yes. even sober this is soberingly beautiful and profound.
(and this: "once or twice or fourteen times or whatever" i'm still giggling at it haha)
anyway- i love this. it's perfect in its details and in its entirety.
like there's a reason you're on my favorites and this just sticks it in my head that much more.
| for shame chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
we don't use bongs here. we just roll.
cigs and rolling paper and grass are easy to get.
easier than finding porn on the internet.
(heard you american kids can't roll for shit.)