Reviews for Black Lotus
FlynMoose chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Your writing is unique and almost haunting. I love it!
Burnin Heart chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Really enjoyed this piece.. the only criticism I have however is that I thought the word 'demigods' just didn't seem to fit. The syllables are too harsh and short. Just an opinon though. Liked the rest of it!
Belladonna Snow chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
lovely. I really enjoyed this peice, good work
TheEvilAshleyness chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Okay so this has a really interesting plot to it but I would like to see it flow more smoothly I don't care if it rhymes I don't care in that way but it just seems like it should flow in a regular beat you know what I'm saying?