Reviews for I'll Follow: Rewrite
oh fug chapter 3 . 11/8/2015
That was intense.
oh fug chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
I like your writing style. It reminds me just *tiny* a bit of mine.
augmentedDREAMS chapter 13 . 8/4/2014
Among all of your versions of your story, I like this one the best (and the latest one the worst). I was disappointed to read your Author's Note but then I went and read your re-rewrite but I still think this one is the best.

I like Valis's character and was saddened when I saw that you had changed it. Valis's character speaks of what he has seen and been through, he just seems so wise. Regarding the pace, I still think this story is the best. The pace is decent if not perfect. There is no point in unnecessarily prolonging the inevitable. I liked how Ayrick and Lydia loved each other so much and that they are finally together and all (almost) all misunderstandings have been taken care of and I was excited to read more about this new development and the inevitable and dreaded reunion of her family.

I will be honest, throughout all the 12 chapters I was praising your work, praising how well you displayed the character's emotions- I loved reading Lydia's thoughts on every situation and I think she is very insightful and capable- and how well you revealed the characters' background, how well you wrote the story, neither to fast, nor too slow.

In a nutshell, I was crushed when I saw that you aren't going to continue this. I don't like the new one. *pout*
oHH chapter 13 . 5/8/2013
OMG! When I saw this update I did a triple take, lol. I thought I was going to read a nice long update; but that is ok as long as you're coming back. A series sounds good. I know there are some characters in this story that I thought could branch off into their own stories. Thanks for letting us know!
EverySilence chapter 13 . 5/8/2013
Why?! I liked how it was going and I thought their story was coming to an end and hopefully we were gonna read the next story of a different character!
Mrs Sorbo chapter 12 . 4/27/2013
brilliant and funny :D
DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 12 . 2/23/2013
Hahaha I am! I will disturb thy king! Lol update soon?
Arsinoe-Aurelio chapter 12 . 11/20/2012
Please continue I love it I'm begging you
Why Do I Need A Name chapter 12 . 6/21/2012
I love this story. Pleaze tell me that you will be writing more.
chicagobabe chapter 12 . 2/5/2012
lmao. loved it.3 Please update sooon.
RomanceObsessed chapter 12 . 2/5/2012
September Stone chapter 12 . 2/5/2012
This should be interesting, cant wait for the next update. Keep up the great work! :)
LcT514 chapter 11 . 1/11/2012
Read all current chapters in one sitting. Am an addict now. Love your story, description and writing style! Totally happy about Lydia and Ayrick clearing up a huge misunderstanding that tore them apart for years... and Lydia's mother has got to be the most detestable [and annoying] person! Sad that Darius is unlucky for having her as a mate; Hopefully Valis finds his Soul soon...Wonder who Max's Soul would be :D.

Looking forward to more!
Moon Sage chapter 11 . 1/11/2012
Oh...both parents have their souls.
EverySilence chapter 11 . 1/9/2012
YAY! UPDATE! Lydia's mom sounds like such a conniving, scheming b*tch.

And I want Valis to find love! He seems like he deserves it and it seems like her really yearns for his own soul a lot.

Please update soon again!
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