Reviews for I'll Follow: Rewrite |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was intense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your writing style. It reminds me just *tiny* a bit of mine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Among all of your versions of your story, I like this one the best (and the latest one the worst). I was disappointed to read your Author's Note but then I went and read your re-rewrite but I still think this one is the best. I like Valis's character and was saddened when I saw that you had changed it. Valis's character speaks of what he has seen and been through, he just seems so wise. Regarding the pace, I still think this story is the best. The pace is decent if not perfect. There is no point in unnecessarily prolonging the inevitable. I liked how Ayrick and Lydia loved each other so much and that they are finally together and all (almost) all misunderstandings have been taken care of and I was excited to read more about this new development and the inevitable and dreaded reunion of her family. I will be honest, throughout all the 12 chapters I was praising your work, praising how well you displayed the character's emotions- I loved reading Lydia's thoughts on every situation and I think she is very insightful and capable- and how well you revealed the characters' background, how well you wrote the story, neither to fast, nor too slow. In a nutshell, I was crushed when I saw that you aren't going to continue this. I don't like the new one. *pout* |
![]() ![]() OMG! When I saw this update I did a triple take, lol. I thought I was going to read a nice long update; but that is ok as long as you're coming back. A series sounds good. I know there are some characters in this story that I thought could branch off into their own stories. Thanks for letting us know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why?! I liked how it was going and I thought their story was coming to an end and hopefully we were gonna read the next story of a different character! |
![]() ![]() ![]() brilliant and funny :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha I am! I will disturb thy king! Lol update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue I love it I'm begging you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Pleaze tell me that you will be writing more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao. loved it.3 Please update sooon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() This should be interesting, cant wait for the next update. Keep up the great work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read all current chapters in one sitting. Am an addict now. Love your story, description and writing style! Totally happy about Lydia and Ayrick clearing up a huge misunderstanding that tore them apart for years... and Lydia's mother has got to be the most detestable [and annoying] person! Sad that Darius is unlucky for having her as a mate; Hopefully Valis finds his Soul soon...Wonder who Max's Soul would be :D. Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...both parents have their souls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! UPDATE! Lydia's mom sounds like such a conniving, scheming b*tch. And I want Valis to find love! He seems like he deserves it and it seems like her really yearns for his own soul a lot. Please update soon again! |