|Reviews for The Perfect Meal|
| Mrs. Justyn Fraser chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
AW THAT LAST LINE IS SO ADORABLE! I can't think of any ways you could improve it. It's lovely and simple and adorable and aww. Who needs men who can cook?
| RentBoheme chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
This was a sweet little story. Sounds like me and someone we know in the kitchen. Take any inspiration from someone? And the line when you talked about old family recipes, I couldn't help but think of the turn-children-to-mice recipe from "The Witches" by Roald Dahl.
I felt that the ending was a little rushed. She kissed him, but did they ever speak before? But it was still a good story. :)
| barelyamiable chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
I thought the last line was a bit too sudden, how it sort of implies that SHE was his destiny, even though their interaction had been incredibly limited. But I do love the idea. This was cute. :)
| oceantown chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
'He was so happy about the cooking class that he even brought his own spatula.'
that was funny. i like the kissing part. cute cute cute XD
| The Digital Damsel chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Very interesting. I'm curious where you will take this. Very intrigued.