Reviews for Midnight Caress |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Soo good! Please continue! I want to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() Omg update I want Caleb to save jaz so UPDATE ALREADY! |
![]() ![]() I think Valier shouldn’t be a man whore if falls in love with Jasmine |
![]() ![]() This story is so amazing! Please please please make a sequel! |
![]() ![]() This story is so amazing! Please please please make a sequel! |
![]() ![]() What seriously? She can't actually like that bastard? |
![]() ![]() This story lacks grammar |
![]() ![]() ![]() omggg lol the sex scenes are haaawt ;P. update soon! i wanna know what happpens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh what a cliffie! :o nice update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot chapter! But the end wow it got me I miss Jazmine already:(:( |
![]() ![]() I'm loving what I've read so far. The plot is creative, and the characters are unique. There are many grammatical mistakes though. I suggest that you find a good proofreader. You have lots of run-on sentences. You often switch tenses (ie. I am versus I was). There are also a bunch of little spelling mistakes and whatnot. I really enjoy reading your fic, but I think it could be even better with a little grammatical tweaking. Good luck with future chapters. I look forward to reading more. :D |
![]() ![]() hey. finish the story. it seems good. |
![]() ![]() Thank you |
![]() ![]() No write more plz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh...is he finally going to be with her? xD |