Reviews for Malevolence Reigning
eehornburg chapter 2 . 1/26/2010
I like it a lot, again I had to re-read it a couple of times to understand what was going on though, but I like the story so far. Also, is your main character a guy or a girl? The whole time I thought it was a male but then at the end of this chapter you said "hey muscle-woman" so I now I'm not sure. It also gets a little confusing without names. I have a hard time figuring out who is talking and who is in the scene, etc. But again, the story so far is interesting and I'm excited to read more.
eehornburg chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This is a really cool prologue. It took me a couple of times to re-read it to fully understand what was going on though. I really liked how you made different traits (Agility, Flexibility, Experience, etc) names, as if they were people or beings. It's really interesting.