|Reviews for Chroma|
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/18/2014
This is probably like bad time for constructive criticism but you said at the start of this chapter that there was something you didn't like about it and I wasnt looking for something I swear it just kinda appeared for me and you probably know it already but shhh the thing that bugged me here is that she was so happy happy smiles with Shaun even though she's been so shut off it kind of felt like it was just a sudden change rather than a gradual one
But aside from that plz teach me how to write and also I realise this is like ages late for a review and I'm sorry but to be fair I would have reviewed sooner and begged for updates waaaay earlier if I knew you wrote and also if I knew this story existed earlier :) much love from your neighbour hood taxi driver
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/17/2014
Hullooo I'm glad you linked me this but now I feel like my writing is super juvenile in comparison and I'm scared of reading anything past the first draft hahahaha that said, this is amazing! I wish I had more then the 20 minutes before bed and after I wake up to read, but I'll be slow progress until I have more spare time. Xoxo your friendly neighbourhood taxi lady 3
| Guest chapter 31 . 10/18/2014
i sat down and read this in one whole sitting and it's beautiful. thank you for writing this and i'm also fairly sure i have a long new playlist to listen to with all the songs in each chapter. :)
| windlessnitez chapter 31 . 7/16/2014
Its over but it sounds like a beginning. question what happened to Kon and Nate?
| Guest chapter 31 . 4/15/2014
Can I just say you made me cry so many times reading this. Beautifully haunting.
| WYMamataro chapter 31 . 3/22/2014
I felt every ounce of pain! Will there be a sequel? I saw closure but...I felt like I want more! Hehe...
| Ystarr chapter 15 . 3/5/2014
This chapter was perfection. It makes me shiver how perfectly you described everything, raw and pure. Amazing
| Jessy-8739 chapter 31 . 1/22/2014
I think this is my favorite book so far on fictionpress, and that saying something cause i've read a lot P
You craft a world with so many layers. A world with a flawless cover full of rich and beautiful teenagers that seem to have a perfect life, but if you dig deeper, you can find tinges of sadness mixed within everyone. It's heartbreakingly beautiful :)
| Jessy-8739 chapter 29 . 1/21/2014
i think i like Chris a little bit less after this last scene
| Jessy-8739 chapter 16 . 1/21/2014
it's incredible, as always. But how can Nate see Chris too?
| Jessy-8739 chapter 7 . 1/21/2014
oh my god, I'm in love with this story! it connects soooo well with the song. seriously. but umm... I'm understand that Chris died (so sad), but.. how did he die?
(sorry if this is a stupid question)
| sinkingshorelines chapter 31 . 1/6/2014
This was beautiful... painfully utterly beautiful. I swear my heart was pounding almost the whole time I was reading this. I've read a lot but I have never seriously gotten this immersed, so moved as if something just clicked in my heart and stayed there. I have never been this attached to mere fictional characters that I felt myself falling for them. I was crying for their pain and eventually laughing uncontrollably when I realized how pathetic I looked. But this is seriously just pure genius and I can't even begin to fathom how a mere mortal like you (and very much like myself) were able to come up with something like this. So, help me god as I try to move on from this as I am still in complete denial that this has ended for me. It should have never ended... but that's just me and my wishful thinking.
| GraceSaader chapter 31 . 12/23/2013
Wow. Just wow. Reading this I got extremely jealous that you had written something so raw and so freaking twisted that it was beautiful, because I had wanted to write something like this for a very long time. It doesn't feel finished. I'm hoping that you have more stories like this to your pen name.
| Shadowswept chapter 31 . 12/9/2013
I'm crying right now. That was a beautiful ending. She came home to the family that loves her, and she had a lovely vision of Chris without the horror. I'm equal parts happy and sad. The best stories never seem long enough. I always want more, but I thought this was a perfect way to end this book. I'm not a big fan of sequels for the most part. They are rarely as good as the first book, but there are exceptions. I feel that this is one of them. These characters are fascinating enough for a second book. I'd love to read about Nate's life at college, and Kon's life at college. They've only just begun their romantic relationship, so I'd also like to read more about that. You said that you know the futures of all the characters, so I'm hoping you'll continue the story once you finish college.
I'm afraid to ask you if Nate and Kon stay together in the future. I know what I want, but you're the author. I hope I see this book published in the not too distant future-and its sequel. Thank you for this amazing story. I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed it and how much I'll miss these characters. This felt like more than entertainment. It felt like getting to know real people, like they really exist out there in the world. I'm one of the lucky ones who found this story right before you finished writing it. I didn't have to wait for updates, but I absolutely would have. These characters are unforgettable.
| Shadowswept chapter 30 . 12/9/2013
I knew he was leaving, but I still wasn't ready for it. I don't believe that this is the end though. Distance won't be an obstacle for them. They're not fickle people. I like what he said to her, that he doesn't know. That's what drew them together, because they were so used to knowing things about other people. They have so much in common, and they understand each other. And he wants her to know him, to know everything about him. I'm hoping that means that he'll want to share everything with her, including his future.
Kon's life is so different now with her dad. She had no one to visit her in the hospital after the crash with Chris, no one to care about her. It seems to me like this will be a turning point in her life. She has a real family now.