Reviews for Nude Model Needed
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
That was hilarious! I loved it!
currentlyaway chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
I mostly loved the way the three girls behaved around each other! I can clearly see me and my friends acting like that with each other! :) Congrats!
x Farii chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Lmao xD

I like ;)
SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Haha sexy

Love it :P
MaxMcDowell chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
That was great, I love it.
dontneedyou chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Hahahaa, this is just simply amazing. Not to mention funny as hell. :) I seriously loved every single word and scene in this one shot. Like, you wouldn't have known that he actually liked her. It's seriously hilarious, her new years resolution is just amazing. You have to have real guts to do that. And also have to be really perverted. Ha!

I really love this story, I enjoyed it to the fullest. :)

-dontneedyou
LyBhing chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
I liked it, a lot! I found it cute. x3

-Lyia.
Kityyy chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
That was good!:)
keena kalina chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
FABULOUS story! I thoroughly enjoyed this. It was short and sweet, and adorably romantic. I really enjoyed the chemistry between Chelsea and Kenneth (whoo, Kenneth! Great character - suave and sexy ;P) I would have definitely enjoyed a bit more dialogue between the two lovebirds but overall I loved it! Thanks for sharing this.
Jhaynee chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
This was hilarious and cute and fluffy! I loved it. I'm still smiling. Hehe.
toujoursmoi chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
Hey,

I really really like this. I love Chelsea's character...and how you made. Normally the shy girl is overdone. This was perfect.

Though it could have been longer maybe, with more building on the tension.

And soem more dialougue between thw two love birds would have been a treat. Other than that, job well done.

M
MK16 chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
LOL cute as ! Wish stuff like this happened in real life !
Ryu-hime chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
ahaha brilliant
Vena Cava chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
My favorite one-shot by you. :) And it's not just because you've thrown a hot boy my way. Keep on writing! This was lovely lovely lovely. Maybe you can work on the other twin. Because woe is my heart, I love twins.
RentBoheme chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
I was intrigued by the title, so I had to read it. This was a funny story. I liked your dialogue, it felt real, and all the sexual innuendo was quite laugh-inducing. I have just one suggestion: you seem to make each sentence a new paragraph. I'd group some of them into paragraphs. Other than that, good job.
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