Reviews for Nude Model Needed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was hilarious! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mostly loved the way the three girls behaved around each other! I can clearly see me and my friends acting like that with each other! :) Congrats! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao xD I like ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha sexy Love it :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great, I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahaa, this is just simply amazing. Not to mention funny as hell. :) I seriously loved every single word and scene in this one shot. Like, you wouldn't have known that he actually liked her. It's seriously hilarious, her new years resolution is just amazing. You have to have real guts to do that. And also have to be really perverted. Ha! I really love this story, I enjoyed it to the fullest. :) -dontneedyou |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it, a lot! I found it cute. x3 -Lyia. |
![]() ![]() That was good!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() FABULOUS story! I thoroughly enjoyed this. It was short and sweet, and adorably romantic. I really enjoyed the chemistry between Chelsea and Kenneth (whoo, Kenneth! Great character - suave and sexy ;P) I would have definitely enjoyed a bit more dialogue between the two lovebirds but overall I loved it! Thanks for sharing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was hilarious and cute and fluffy! I loved it. I'm still smiling. Hehe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I really really like this. I love Chelsea's character...and how you made. Normally the shy girl is overdone. This was perfect. Though it could have been longer maybe, with more building on the tension. And soem more dialougue between thw two love birds would have been a treat. Other than that, job well done. M |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL cute as ! Wish stuff like this happened in real life ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahaha brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite one-shot by you. :) And it's not just because you've thrown a hot boy my way. Keep on writing! This was lovely lovely lovely. Maybe you can work on the other twin. Because woe is my heart, I love twins. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was intrigued by the title, so I had to read it. This was a funny story. I liked your dialogue, it felt real, and all the sexual innuendo was quite laugh-inducing. I have just one suggestion: you seem to make each sentence a new paragraph. I'd group some of them into paragraphs. Other than that, good job. |