Reviews for Nude Model Needed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA, THEY RECORDED IT? That is kind of sketchy, but that is so cute! I love the name Kenneth. This story is adorable. |
![]() ![]() Man, that was cute! I admit, her resolution seems a little bit stretched but I think it still works. I think it was awesome overall, there were a couple parts that I felt you could have done without (especially at the beginning). The ending was definitely fun though, great job! |
![]() ![]() Kyya! :) I loved ît [: |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha cute! good writing and plot building. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was amazing i love it so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Borat voice: very nice! I adored this story. I was a little sad not to get to see more clues about Kenneth's crush on Chelsea or to hear more about it but it was cute overall. Now, about Sophie and Kent? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great start! i'm loving the title. ~daydee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I loved it, you're such a great writer. The title and summary certainly caught my attention :). The flow was wonderful, your style of writing was great and it was easy to visualise the scenes. There were so many funny moments, I was laughing throughout. Those three make such a great team. 'You know, by the time we’re done with all this foreplay, I may be dead, Chels. Sophie, help me out or I may never get the expositional orgasm I’m looking for.' One of my favourite lines. Oh and the part where she sees his underwear...hubba 0_o Is there going to be a part two for Sophie? ;) |