Reviews for Jealousy
Forgotten Shadow Of A Memory chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I feel sickened to myself that I can relate to this entirely. Very deep.
i-want-2-delete-my-account chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Really good rhyming. Subject I can relate to as well. I like the idea of the blood being dark jade green - reinforces that jealousy is an internal/personal thing.
VividReality chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Paper confessions.

Enlighten the author ._.

and leave the reader

wondering.

Why your balligrapho

would grace the subject

of the ugly loco.

I believe you though : /

you love the ugly loco

and I know your deceptive scheme

goes something along the lines of:

IF THEY COULD ONLY SEE ME

SOMEBODY LOOK! IM AMAZING LOOK AT ME

Self sabatoged shouts in

silent sheets of satire

will never self correct.

I advocate the thing I fear

eradicating the pen

to reach the ear

Walk outside and live your life

you'll figure it out

your stuck in your mind.

Theres no training to rescue

a drowning mind. Get out of the pool.

You'll see. Your love and you worst enemy

are all in the pool of your mind.