|Reviews for Jealousy|
| Forgotten Shadow Of A Memory chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I feel sickened to myself that I can relate to this entirely. Very deep.
| i-want-2-delete-my-account chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Really good rhyming. Subject I can relate to as well. I like the idea of the blood being dark jade green - reinforces that jealousy is an internal/personal thing.
| VividReality chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Enlighten the author ._.
and leave the reader
Why your balligrapho
would grace the subject
of the ugly loco.
I believe you though : /
you love the ugly loco
and I know your deceptive scheme
goes something along the lines of:
IF THEY COULD ONLY SEE ME
SOMEBODY LOOK! IM AMAZING LOOK AT ME
Self sabatoged shouts in
silent sheets of satire
will never self correct.
I advocate the thing I fear
eradicating the pen
to reach the ear
Walk outside and live your life
you'll figure it out
your stuck in your mind.
Theres no training to rescue
a drowning mind. Get out of the pool.
You'll see. Your love and you worst enemy
are all in the pool of your mind.