Reviews for Love
kissing walls chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
I wish I could leave a review as amazing as this poem, but I can really only say:

Lovely.
sealednectar chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
I just want to say wow. So... wow. The definition of love in this poem is really well done, I loved every example. Great metaphors and connotations.

The idea of claustrophobia and love; this was excellent too. The lines: 'I will never let you go./Never ever ever/Even if you beg.' are almost obsessive, sinister to my mind but this IS what people say when in love.

Also, the ending is jarring and so very abrupt, 'You will never understand./Get out.' as evidenced by the two full stops, a metaphor for love perhaps? How it can end so abruptly. There could be so many readings of this.

All in all, a fantastic poem!:)

sealednectar