Reviews for Power
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I like this!

"Striking flint against each syllable,

Blades in sharp vowels,

Consonants like blunt, heavy stones"

I like the example of how words can be like weapons.

& favorite line,

"Your laughter is that thin line

Between forgivable and unbearable."

Wonderful work here.
SugarCoatedChaos chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Wonder why Catholicism came to mind when I read this. Doesn't make me love it any less, however.