|Reviews for Power|
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I like this!
"Striking flint against each syllable,
Blades in sharp vowels,
Consonants like blunt, heavy stones"
I like the example of how words can be like weapons.
& favorite line,
"Your laughter is that thin line
Between forgivable and unbearable."
Wonderful work here.
| SugarCoatedChaos chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Wonder why Catholicism came to mind when I read this. Doesn't make me love it any less, however.