Reviews for Power and Finesse
may16 chapter 23 . 5/31/2010
Exams finished!

Good chapter as always, ahaha Rowans returns to his old habits and the part where he was being dragged by Layla brothers was so funny!

Can't wait for more ;)
bookaholic13 chapter 23 . 5/27/2010
Dane and chance make a cute couple! good job!
Esquirella chapter 23 . 5/26/2010
I know Chance is supposed to be a straight character, but it just seems like he would be a great person for Dane to "take care of", as Dane put it. And it seems likes it's already a two-way street. Just saying ...

Avalon definitely has his work cut out for him. Rowan just seems like he's looking for a way to get Avalon to stop falling in love with him, which is so sad ... and yet very in tune with Rowan's fragile character. Hopefully, Avalon will see this and keep deflecting the walls Rowan constantly tries to erect when he feels them getting ever closer emotionally.

Oh, God, please let that poor doctor have some fun with Sierra! He's suffered enough! LOL!

Great update!
Megsi chapter 23 . 5/23/2010
This story is so addicitve! I should really be studying but... oh well. :)

I love Dom. And Sierra seems like a sweetie. Although, I keep expecting Rowan's mum to come back at some stage. I think she will at least... I'm glad that he likes someone and that he'd trying to move on. I totally did not see that coming.

Rowan is so annoying some times! He just can't make up his damn mind! Although his moment with Henriette was very cute. It's funny how he's slowly turning nice but then he gets a conscious and gets scared. Avalon is so patient to put up with his crap but it's hard to not love Rowan.

I feel really sorry for Dane now. I've found myself loving him again and I really want him to be happy! He deserves to end up with someone... even if it isn't Chance!

I didn't really have much time to reply but update when you can!
Blo0d StaiNed Rose chapter 23 . 5/22/2010
this chapter was amazing...:) i loved how you ended sweet, dane finally showing a softer side to him...i guess he is a big softie as well..:P dom and chance mums was a suprise but when henrietts spoke to her, and dom taking of the ring...ohh too much implications not to put a smile on my face for poor Dom...i hope it works out with them..:)
ToraYashaChan chapter 23 . 5/22/2010
aw...the ending was so CUTE.

I like how this chapter turned out *so excited for the next chapter* I just want to hug Dane right now...poor guy...he seems so sad D: . But hopefully he'll be able to be happy with Chance. They're extremely cute together. Every part when it's just been the two of them is adorable as hell. They're along the lines of how adorable Tommy and Kona are together.
Megsi chapter 22 . 5/20/2010
Yay! You updated! I wasn't able to check for a while because I have midyear exams soon and I'm freaking out but I was totally happy to see that you had posted.

I like how Avalon and Rowan's relationship is going. It's ridiculously cute, a lot of hard work and lots of lust :). I love that while Avalon does slightly baby Rowan and treat him as a damsel in distress a lot of the time he also forces Rowan to do things for himself. I know that there will be more drama soon but I liked them in this chapter. Avalon actually made him get up out of bed! And that kiss at night was simply adorable. They are pretty amazing :)

I loved that you did a bit from Alex an Aaron's point of view. It was nice to know that they actually care. Although both of them for different reasons... But I'm pretty sure that Rowan and Avalon are for real. At least... THEY BETTER BE! :)

Chance is adorable. I can sort of see him being gay and there was a little moment in which Dane seemed almost to sort of like him but I don't know... I can see Dane babying him a lot, give himself something to distract himself with. Lord knows, they both need it, lol. Whether they're friends or gay lovers I'll be happy. Although I do hope that Dane finds someone because he is honestly a little sweetie, I just lost sight of that when he went through his horrible little phase of trying to break Avalon and Rowan up. I was a little suspicious of his motives when he was being himself to Rowan again but then I was really proud of him that he was giving up Rowan. Although, I'm afraid that Rowan will decide to use Dane again. I hope not for everyone's sake!

I'm also really proud of Eli... He stood up to them! Go him! Give him a pat on the back for me :). Not such a sissy after all, hey? Yeah... I love him :). Although there is a little less Layla loving going on now. I agree that she has good reason to hate Rowan but I just wish she'd quit being so cynical and just be friends with him again. Although maybe if she does wait a little while he'll actually change a little and appreciate her more... Maybe treat their relationship as an actual, normal friendship and not be so dependent on her anymore.

I'm excited about the game and worried that Rowan finding out about the divorce will ruin everything.

P.S. I'd love to read the Tommy and Kona thing! It sounds like an excellent idea as I love them both so much! So even though you're not asking... I'm telling you to do it :)
bookaholic13 chapter 22 . 5/19/2010
please dont let your new story interfere with this one. other than that i'm fine! :) good luck!
Of Wolves chapter 22 . 5/18/2010
:) thumbs up
Blo0d StaiNed Rose chapter 22 . 5/18/2010
i love the fact that dane decided to move tell you the truth i have this small inclination that he and chase would make a wonderfull couple and a very cute one at that...i hope alex and aaron will get to make that big brother talk with avalon..that would be fun to see, rowan is soo cute, its hard not to love him but yet sometimes he drives everyone crazy, i love the way avalon is pushing him to do things on his own yet taking care of him at the same time...i cant wait for more, i hope you will update soon cause i am addicted to your story )
may16 chapter 22 . 5/18/2010
I should study for my exams ...

But how can I not read your story? haha

In this chapter Rowan was so cute and funny! I think now Avalon is the disease, he infected Rowan and me!

Thank you and I really hope you will get more reviews because this story rocks ! ;)
Esquirella chapter 22 . 5/17/2010
Yeah, Layla's definitely turned into the brat here. Good thing Eli's looking out for her. Also, it's probably way too soon for her to forgive Rowan anyway, since it would likely turn him back into his old way. His slow change is more believable this way, and Avalon seems perfectly capable to helping him grow up.

As to the preques, I say, "Awesome!" You could go back to writing the remoreseless Rowan (pre-Avalon days) and we can see Tommy and Kona!

And as for the non-reviewers, eh! Try to forgive them for their inaction. Some people prefer to love a story in silence. As long as they read it, they're enjoying it. If they can't come up with anything to say after this many chapters, screw 'em!
ToraYashaChan chapter 22 . 5/17/2010
Is Dane going to stop trying to get Rowen back now?
BRMR chapter 22 . 5/17/2010
As soon as I read the chapter title I knew that it had to do with Dane. Speaking of Dane I have just one thing to say...AW! :( That was the only thing I could think whenever I read Dane's part about Rowan. I felt so bad for him! I wanted to give him a big old hug! It was so weird though. I mean last chapter I kind of wanted to punch him in the face because he was being so devious and trying to mess up Rowan and Avalon's relationship. But now, finally, he's beginning to accept it. ABOUT TIME! But I hope that you give Dane a happy ending because I really think he deserves it. Dane really is a sweet guy he was just acting like an asshole because he was hurt. I never really knew the extent to which he cared about Rowan...I have to admit though, when Dane all of a sudden started acting all nice and normal toward Rowan, I was kinda suspicious, too. I was like, 'wait, is this another one of Dane's mind games?'. But I'm happy with the way things turned out...

I really enjoyed Alex and Aarons part in this, you should include them more. Layla's being a bitch as usual. Idk for some reason I just can't bring myself to like her. I mean, how could she just go from being Rowan's best friend to hating him the next when he's trying to form a REAL relationship? It's like Eli said; she should be happy for him (I am!), ecstatic even, because she more than anyone knows Rowan and what his past is like and all the issues he has (committment and otherwise...) She should be there for him to offer support and encouragement in the big step that he's taking to do the unthinkable; trust someone enough to actually give them the potential to break his heart...

Oh man, I know the shit is going to hit the fan when Rowan learns of the divorce, especially because Domonic lied to him about it because of course he won't understand that he was only trying to protect him from getting hurt... But anyway I think I ranted for long enough. Hopefully this makes up for not reviewing the last two chapters? I swear I was planning on reviewing but it seemed like I only had enough time to read the chapter because by the time I finished, I had something to do (I'm the type of reader that likes to pretend like I'm actually in the story and say the lines out loud. Haha, I'm such a dork. But, yeah, I also like to drag the story out and re-read certain lines and parts that I enjoyed in particular...Yeah I know kind of pathetic...But I can't help my self sometimes!)
Tripliss chapter 22 . 5/17/2010
Yay! A new chapter! I've been so busy with my finals that i haven't had time to check my email and i was so happy when i saw two updates from the story! :D Loved the chapters by the way lol. Alex and Aaron are awesome. Can't wait for the next one!
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