Reviews for Power and Finesse
Fragile Daydreamer chapter 33 . 7/13/2011
Hey, Kitty Roar! ok, so i just finished 33 chapters so now i get to review. yay! I'm just gonna jump around and write my thoughts as they come to me, ok?

Alright, first off: YOU BROKE AVALON'S LEG! How could you? :D

Although if I think about it, it was the perfect time for a role reversal. I just didn't think you'd do it like that.

Secondly, major props for your characterization of Rowan. Man, all the intricate little nuances of his personality! You did great potraying him as the guy you want to deck while at the same time giving us a peek at his motivations and insecurities. I think that makes him so lovable... once you get over the urge to skin him alive and rub him with salt. [sorry, got a little morbid and gory there]

Third, big thank you for reinstating Dane. For a while there I thought he was on the verge of being the psychotic thwarted lover. So glad he's ALMOST over it.

Fourth, are you planning to have Rowan blurt out what Avalon's mom said to him? I'm kinda waiting for that part. You have me this close from trying to slap the back of Rowan's head and go, "Just tell him already!" [And, by the way, I love how Rowan is running out of excuses not to process and examine his feelings...]

Fifth, will Rowan and Jacqueline get a mother-son moment, or is that just too out of character or too much to ask?

Lastly, what hole did you fall in, girl? It's been like four months since you updated! Don't abandon us! Update! Please! lolz

Looking forward to the next one!
RaeAnnLove chapter 33 . 7/5/2011
Omg never stop writing! This story became my addiction over night! I promise to review every chapter if you update and with meaningful reviews lol. I had to get an account on fictionpress just for this story. I found it on accident and it's the best thing I ever did. This story is just getting extremely good and I want to read more. Update soon I be of you!

~your devoted new reader Rae Ann
Zhandra01 chapter 33 . 7/3/2011
Hi *waves*

I just found your story and I’m have to say I'm just loving it. I hope you will write more soon, because I’m very interested how it will go on.

Good luck & happy muses

smother-alchemist chapter 33 . 6/16/2011
okay i just want to stay that i am completely in love with this story i haven't stopped reading it at all today until i finished,Rowan is just such a loveable character even with all of his flaws and i cannot wait to see what happens next:)
TinySliceOfHeaven chapter 33 . 6/6/2011
Hi. :D

Awww I hope you know that this story is amazingness and beautiful and ridiculusly shocking all at the same time. :D

OK, Rowan. At first I liked him; he just seemed like that cocky assholish-type, but then I'm like.. what the f*ck is up with this guy? For seriousness? Because I mean, he's spoiled, and rude, and so many other qualities that you really don't want to see in a person.

And then comes Avalon, and I just have to keep reading because for me it was hinted that they would be together - from the summary - and I just needed to have Rowan - for lack of better explaination - be saved by his 'knight in shining armor'. :)

I'm really not trying to diss on your character - and I'm backing myself up with the fact that you don't want us to entirely love Rowan - but god, there were sometimes where he just irritated the crap out of me. I know you were sort of hoping for that reaction from your readers, so I guess good job? But at the same time, you kind of wonder how he could be so broken? -.-

Unlike apparently a lot of your readers, I so sympathize with Dane. I mean I'm sorry, but no matter how desperate someone is for love, they should never do that. And to Dane too; he's just too sweet for that. -.- I'm really happy that he's finding Chance, even if there relationship is sort of complex at best. :)

Oh my god, I love Tommy and Kona. . They're such an amazing affectionate couple it's heartbreaking. I just can't wait for you to write there story; I know it'll be amazing. And I love how you include that Kona was the first one to fall; it's so unexpected yet so right at the same time. :)

Layla and Eli. Oh my god :D They're that type of couple that I could just imagine will grow old together, and even though Eli is a total 'gentle giant', I love how he stands up for anyone he loves - Rowan, Layla. It's so cute. .

Blech, there's this little thing nagging me at the back of my head; I've totally forgotten it, and it bugs me. Ah well.

Jacky. God I just really, really hate that lady. She's using everyone to get to her son, when it seems that if she really cared about him, she wouldn't have left in the first place. I dunno. I just really, really hope her and Dom don't get back together.

OK, so like I've already mentioned, I kind of felt that Rowan and Av would be the ones getting together; I'm wondering if we weren't supposed to know that, or if I was the only one? (I saw a comment about it in one of your A/N's.. hm) I'll admit that I got a bit.. curious? When Dane came into the picture, but yeah. I dunno. They just seemed the main couple from the beginning. :D I can't really think on what else to comment, or I can, but.. I can't write uber long reviews. Sorry t.t Just yeah, I really like this, though :) You have really good description, and a good way of getting the readers to feel how you want them too. Not to mention, this story was extremely well-written. Congrats on that. :) Keep up the amazing work!

- Ella
Ayden Robertson chapter 33 . 5/29/2011
I've been reading this for a while but never commented. I've really enjoyed reading this story so far. Rowan is a...captivating character. I think we can all place ourselves in the shoes of any one of his friends and form opinions on him from a myriad of perspectives, but you've done a great job of developing him and breaking him down slowly via the love of others- especially Avalon. Thank you for your work on this, and keep it up- it's good stuff. :)
Road to Anywhere chapter 33 . 5/17/2011
I would love to give this the absolutely glowing, detailed review that it deserves, but noooo. You just HAD to make it so delightfully addictive that I stayed up until a truly ridiculous hour reading to this point. That means that my brain is dead and that I can only speak in generalities.

And generally, I absolutely loved this. So, so, so much. No pressure, but if you don't update soon I might just have to throw a Rowan-worthy bitchfit.

Not really. But I would be super happy about it.

Thanks for a great read! Can't wait for more.

wizzy891 chapter 33 . 5/7/2011
Gosh Rowan Get Om My Nerves But I Love Him As Much As I Hate Him.
erismalfoy chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I actually had to stop reading so I could comment after reading this-"How dare you!" Layla screamed into his ear, "You don't even pay attention to me when I'm about to kill you! It made me laugh so hard; it's exactly something I would do. So far this is a brilliant story. Can't wait to read the rest.
Angelxoxo13 chapter 33 . 4/16/2011
I like it when Parker said something like stay on the bench, don't run away unless they after you. That's hillarious, plus Parker regreting of his name, Beau is man, right? You finally make me shed a tear on this chapter, Rowan's unavailable to say love to Avalon is devastating. Way to end the chapter. :'( It's one hell of chapter, ups and downs, Rowan's nervous wreak. It's very touching. Can't wait of what future brings these people. Oh yeah, this Q run through my mind frequently when I read these all chapters, instead it keep dodging me, anyway, does it have to make everyone in this story turns gay? Execpt Elijah of course, I just hope he won't swing.
Angelxoxo13 chapter 32 . 4/16/2011
For all that Rowan makes his mom, Jack's doesn't act like one. And poor, poor, Avalon's broke his ankle. :'(
Angelxoxo13 chapter 31 . 4/16/2011
:) amu~sing.
Angelxoxo13 chapter 30 . 4/16/2011
Everytime I read boobs-trap my mind kinda turn it into man-boobs :-/ very weird. Rowan's getting insecure.
Angelxoxo13 chapter 29 . 4/16/2011
Lol to the last paragraph. Finally Rowan shows emotion. Good. Good.
Angelxoxo13 chapter 28 . 4/16/2011
Ouch a project. That's not good for Rowan. Btw if anyone knew a stripper who have a Paprica name, pm me. Lol.
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