Reviews for Power and Finesse
BRMR chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
I like this story. I'm actually enjoying Rowan's personality and find that I can strangely empathize with him. Idk. Layla annoys the crap out of me though. No criticism or anything. But really, keep it up! I'm really anxious to see Rowans reaction to the kiss between him and Dane and doubly curious to see how Avalon fits into all of this (Seriously)
ToraYashaChan chapter 9 . 2/23/2010
I...actually wasn't expecting Dane/Rowen to come out of this story when I started reading it. I love Dane to death. I laugh my ass off at his antics. But I was almost expecting Avalon/Rowan

I think I could very much like Dane/Rowan xD Rowan needs someone who will coddle him...and Dane is definitely the type who would do that. Though Avalon could probably be a good match for him too if we want Rowan to be a less selfish human being.
deerka-m chapter 9 . 2/23/2010
Bwahah. I made you update. 8D. D'aww, as long as you keep writing, I'll keep reviewing. Deal?

Anywho. Changed my mind - I like Dane. Hard to say though, he still seems avid to rape you when you aren't looking. But I guess that's what makes him Dane. Or something. On the topic of freaking Chance - "and apparently Chance." That made me laugh. Just because Rowan didn't seem to know why/how he managed to end up almost-spooning with Chance. xD. Ah, and Layla totally had to give Rowan a pep-talk before the date. That was adorable. And somehow funny, because Rowan's clueless.

So, I had to re-read the end of this chapter because I really didn't see it coming. Seriously. "The world was going to end"? Ragnarok. That's what that is. And now I'm all confused about Avalon, dammit! Cliff-hangers, I tell you. Can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em.

Just another note (or something) here: I couldn't find any errors or spelling mistakes in this one. ...Then again, maybe I was a teeny bit too immersed in it. I get the feeling I wouldn't be a very good beta. Oops.
WayfarerRedemption chapter 9 . 2/23/2010
I love this chapter! At first I wanted Rowan to be with Avalon but Dane has grown on me a lot. I have been wondering how Avalon fits into the story, but I think he would be good being in a relationship with Layla. Then Rowan will have a fight with both Avalon and Layla, causing major 't wait for the next chapter!
Nineheart chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Oh gawd. Dane you sneaky...I feel bad for Rowan-and maybe Avalon, for not yet fitting into the picture. GAAH, update update update!
deerka-m chapter 8 . 2/22/2010
Reviewing again because I didn't know there was another chapter -facepalm-

Anyway. Dane kinda scares me, a little. He seems like the type of guy to touch you in your sleep, ya know? Hahah, but he and Rowan have some cute interactions here and there. Avalon likes picking on Rowan, as usual xD

I really like Rowan. He's a really dynamic character, but not overly so - if that made sense. He's average, but above that. Bah. Keep writing? And start studying too, will ya?

Lulz xD.
deerka-m chapter 7 . 2/22/2010
So. I had to create an account just for this story because it's so... addicting. Your characters are AMAZING. Normally I have a lot of issues with the way people put their characters into play and how their personalities clash, but no complaints here. Rowan and Avalon seem to fit like puzzle pieces and Layla and the rest of the team all bring something different/unique to the table.

Anyway, I like where this is going. Rowan is quite the guy, isn't he? I lol'd at Chase, by the way. What a dumbarse he can be xDD

Keep writing? ;]
Nineheart chapter 7 . 2/16/2010
Hook line and sinker? I love Rowan, I really do. I think he's really more complicated than what everyone gives him credit for. I hope Avalon sees that Rowan just needs someone to luve. :)
Megsi chapter 7 . 2/16/2010
I really loved this chapter! A lot did happen but it had a good pace and it was really good.

Wow. I didn't expect that to happen with the denfence thing, I want to know how Rowan takes it when they start to play.

I love how your story and characters are so... nuts, lol. I love all the characters and their relationships; especially the love-hate thing between Rowan and Layla and how you've made Avalon 'hooked' on Rowan although I expect that it won't be smooth sailing, Avalon will probably put up a decent fight, lol.

Awesome work!
WayfarerRedemption chapter 7 . 2/15/2010
While I was expecting a more explosive Rowan , It was still a good scene. You showed a different light to Rowan and I liked it , particularly how you showed the similarities between Rowan and his mom when they throw up in stressful situations. And Im sure that there will be a time where Rowan will explode once ?
unremarkablism chapter 6 . 2/15/2010
i don't know why, but i really like your writing style. it's very. erm. i don't know how to describe it, but it's good.

okay so avalon is a beast, if i were rowan i swear to god i would have hit that in, like, chapter 3. and an amalgamation of all 4 (count em four, i know such a huge number) of my gay guy friends. like crazy flamboyant. and unfortunately there's a lot of unrequited(?) love goin on too. ah that's what's so frustrating about this story. there's dane, who is a doll no joke i love him, and then there's avalon who's like "obby im feelin me some rowan right now aw yeah" and yet rowan does zilch towards both of them! get it together woman, i appreciate the flamboyant gay and the plot and also layla is a badass kind of, but man love i need it.

also have i mentioned this story is good yet. because that is an obligation of mine and also a right, i would boldly profess my love for you but...not in front of the others. ;{
Nineheart chapter 6 . 2/14/2010
Avalon! Fall in love with Rowan already! I love love love Rowan to death-what can I say? I converted to the Religion of Rowan.

GAAH, update!
WayfarerRedemption chapter 6 . 2/13/2010
I just love Rowan!yeah he has a lot of personality problems , but that's what make's him interesting. I have a feeling that the meeting with Parker is not going to be a happy situation For Rowan , but I can't wait for him explode!
plumblossom chapter 5 . 2/12/2010
These are some really complicated people. I like that.
Megsi chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Your character descriptions are really good, not just physical features but their personalities too. I think this is a great thing because not only can we picture them but we have a clear sense of who they are, so well done!

It's pretty funny in some places and the dialogue and characters seem very real.

There were not when spelling errors so good job on that front :)

When you describe Rowan he seems like the kind of person I wouldn't like... but in a way that makes me like him, lol. I can see him being a character I will love.

Layla seems very interesting and Avalon does too. I like them both already! Dane is... Dane. Which is great.

Keep it up!
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