Sorry I didn't review before! But I was in a hurry when I found this story and I had to favourite so I'd remember it.

I really like this because you go into good detail when describing your characters. You can get a clear of picture of every character and each one seems realistic. How old are they? It's quite funny in some bits and I'm interested to see where you take it.

I couldn't spot many spelling mistakes or anything so good job!