I'm dying. So cute. So touching. Must have moar.

Oh, this chapter is so sweet, funny and dramatic in the same time i.i I think it's my favourite chapter. But still this fic is my favourite, so is really difficult to choose the best chapter...I'm in love with all of the characters! D

Please updated soon!

Yay! An update! Oh poor Avalon his leg being broken and Rowan being his evasive one track minded self. I hope hope hope that Jac isn't forgiven and Miss hot soccer mom Serria(sp?) gets a break from Rowan. Lol. Chance is so adorable with his logic. I just love him.

Please, please, pleasepleaseplease update this story! I love it so much. Rowan and Avalon are so amazing together, you've done suck a great job showing Rowan's changing personality. Much love to you!

You sneaky awesome little addictive creative little devil of torture. You YOU! I stayed up late for 2 nights because of you and your awesome writing skills. And somehow I was under a stupid misguided notion it was finished. I could cry. This story is just so GODS DAMNED GOOD! How in the world have you stayed hidden and not have praise bosted from the mountain tops. I am so freakin hooked. Damn! So...ugh...do you know when your gonna update...again?

please update soon!)

how adorable! little rowie took charge!

I bet Rowan takes his anger and frustration out on that other team, too. They won't know what hit them!

And Jacqueline is still a shrew! Maybe Rowan can arrange for her to get run over by a steamroller or something. I really can't stand her.

i can feel more drama coming...i hope you find your stride back, and update soon ;)

I don't think Jacqueline should be given another chance. I'll kill some whores if she ends up being all snuggly with Dom and Rowan and everyone else.

I understand forgiving your mom for making a few mistakes, but why the fuck would you forgive someone who wasn't even there at all?

Anywhore. Great read. Keep up the good work. :D

Ok, so I don't really know why you don't like this chapter, I think it's brilliant, but I guess we're always our harshest critics when it comes to things like these...

I really want Rowan to reconcile with his mum. I kind of like her but don't... but I definitely do NOT want to see her back with Dom.

Rowan was absolutely adorable when Avalon broke his leg. I had this big smile on my face from how cute and protective he was being. I really liked the way you described that scene, it was really well done.

I have a few ideas about what's going to happen now but I hate being wrong so I'll wait and see what happens.

I think I forgot about this story... but I'm glad you updated! I missed it when I remembered and I was still excited to see that you'd updated :D

OMG love the chappie. I've been looking forwards to it for ages! But it was very eventful so you made up for it XD.

It was worth the wait :D.

Another great chapter. Though poor Avalon.

ASFKJASHBDFKBSDK I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! 8D Every chapter is a good chapter, in my case. I can't wait to see Rowan and Avalon interact in the next chapter. (:

omg, I hate jack so much, how can avalon be on her side? seriously? I mean, yes she's rowan's mother, but she left him, when rowan was a kid, she protected him too much and now she's manipulating dominic and avalon... it's just... I hate her... why can't anyone slap her? I want a slap!

I know that you, as the author, think it's for the best that they end up with their son and mother relationship fixed but I, as someone that reads this and simply loves this story, think it's not looking good... jacqueline is a b*tch and she doesn't deserve dominic or rowan... besides, I think sierra and dominic are a good pair, and this way, chance can be part of the family! if jack is going to be admitted to that family, (I think I was clear that I don't want that but I'll resign myself if that happens...) then she needs to be far, far away from all the men...

avalon is too forgiving for his own good, why oh why did he have to keep the chain with the medallion? *LE sigh*

And I gotta say "Ouch!" because that leg must hurt at least a little bit, I mean, my mom broke her foot once and her arm another time, and it hurt, HURT. Avalon is cute when he sees rowan so worried, then again, rowan is acting cute too :P calling his father who doesn't remember anything anymore about broken bones was kinda funny and cute e.e

Please update soon and make Rowan slap his stupid mother! I'm definitely looking forward to it!