Reviews for Power and Finesse
celes101 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
feeling withdrawal, but don't mind me. hope the post-breakup is getting better
Dark Lynnette chapter 27 . 7/8/2010
That's was super candy cane sweet. Another fantastic chapter.
Esquirella chapter 29 . 7/7/2010
Whoa! Wow! And every other excalamtion I can think of! So much happened here! But the biggest thing, I think anyway, is that Dom just begged Rowan to emotionally support him. Now THAT'S trust!
Dark Lynnette chapter 19 . 7/7/2010
Finally. Dane was just getting creepier and creepier with his wandering hands.

Amazing character work with Rowan. Fabulously consistent and I'm eager to see how he'll become more of a real human being. Avalon is great, too. Love it when they butt heads.
Megsi chapter 29 . 7/7/2010
Haha. Don't crush my dreams! I'll just keep re-reading forever then! And thank God for the Tommy and Kona thing because their part is getting small again :)

Avalon's Dad is such a butt! I can't believe he said that to my poor little Rowan ;(. But I guess a freakout was over-due after what Dana said. And I can't believe Avalon stood up to/defied his pop to defend Rowan's honour (sort of) and go rescue his damsel... even if Rowan is being typically him and refusing to tell anyone what's really going on so that he can continue to wallow in self-despair caused by mis-understanding...Ah, he's so complex and misunderstood, lol. Although Rowan saying that he adored Avalon was adorable in itself :).

Dance was cute. It's cool that they're both kind of challenging and testing eachother. I believe they're perfect.

The moments between Dom and Rowan made me want to cry; I actually nearly did... I got that kind of eyes-welling-up-with-tears kind of thing, lol. But it was so nice how they were hugging and behaving like a family. Aw! And Jacqueline... Damn her! But... I have a feeling that once Rowan gets over his anger their reunion will be rather emotional.

Also, I laughed for ages at the Rowan encyclopedia. Hahaha, hilarious. But it would be highly practical.

I can't really remember what I was going to say seeing as I went away after reading the chapter and I'm making myself dizzy somehow through moving the scroll button too fast so I'll leave it at that, lol.
Dark Lynnette chapter 10 . 7/6/2010
Hilarious! Totally dig your writing style and pacing. Love the characters and ridiculous situations Rowan creates. Dialogue is pretty awesome, too.
Handsome Devil chapter 28 . 7/6/2010
Whoa. Dude.

I was just stalking this amazing story of yours and I realized something was wrong with my review...

Who's Scott? Why did I mention a Scott? Where did I get the name?

I meant Chance. I want Chance and Dane to get together. And I want Chance to be the one taking care of Dane. Ha. Not this imaginary Scott character. :P
Dark Lynnette chapter 4 . 7/6/2010
this is a fun story. Don't really know how I found it but I'm glad I did. the players are hilarious and totally wacky. can't believe the ego that is Rowan. it's fabulous and sad at the same time. great story telling.
Nikolai Lee chapter 29 . 7/6/2010
It just keeps getting better and better doesn't it? ;D I'll be waiting for teh next one. I'd type a long review, but I can't seem to. o_o sorry.
Handsome Devil chapter 29 . 7/5/2010

Je t'adore! SERIOUSLY.

Actually, scratch that, je t'aime. et je veux me marrier toi.

Ha. je sais comment parler francais, aussi, Rowan. you can't hide anything from me!

anyway, this is the cutest thing ever. I never would've thought I'd find Rowan's bitchiness endearing one day, but I honestly do. il est très mignon. :)

I can't wait for the next update. also, I love Chane and Dane together. it's so hopelessly cute. I hope Scott can show Dane how to be taken care of. I wouldn't mind an entire chapter about Dane and Scott in the near future. Hint hint.

J'aime ton histoire. Update soon.
zac04 chapter 29 . 7/5/2010
wow...simply poor Rowan, not solving his insecurities with avalon and then this with his mum happens...:( you made me cry at the end...hope you will update soon...i cant wait :D
BRMR chapter 29 . 7/5/2010
Rowan adores Avalon! Aww that's so sweet! Well, I mean it's not like I didn't already know that but I just never thought he'd say it out loud. You know what struck me as strange, though? Rowan admitted more of his feelings to Avalon than Avalon did to Rowan, albeit in a cryptic way, he still did which in my opinion in a very big feat for Rowan. But anyway, Avalon said he planned on falling in love with Rowan to his face but in his thoughts he already thinks of himself as being in love with Rowan...I know a couple of chapters back Avalon didn't want to admit his feelings to Rowan because he didn't want to scare him off, but Rowan practically told him he was in love with him or close to it anway; even said he thought his feelings for Avalon were greater than Avalons for him... That just goes to show you how far Rowan has really come since the beginning of the story.

I nearly broke my heart when he rushed to see Dominic at the hospital and he told him he needed a doctor because his heart hurt. It was so endearing it simultaneously made my heart melt and made me want to punch Avalon and his dad in the face for making Rowan feel that way...Wow, I just realized how totally biased I sounded! But I can't help it. I know I've said this before (or something to this extent) but Rowan just brings out the maternal instincts in me that I never knew I had. I just want to like protect him from all the bad things in the world. Ugh! I feel like such an idiot, wanting to baby a fictional character...but yeah I was very happy to see Dance back no matter how brief, they're so adorable together! I just love how Chance catches Dane off gaurd and leaves him out of his element.

Dominic and Rowan, lately have just been leaving me with a warm fuzzy feeling. They're finally (as far as I have witnessed) acting as Father and Son; Family. And you know, I think that's what Rowan needs and has wanted for long time; a family. It wasn't always about just having someone paying attention to him, he just wanted someone who cared and now I think he's finally getting that now...

I'm getting the feeling that we're nearing the end of the road for this story and I'm so dreading the day I get the alert in my inbox telling me it's the last chapter! I can honestly say I will sincerely miss this story and all the antics and drama...I am really happy that I stumbled across this story...Oh wow, I feel like I'm saying good bye already :( It must be the angst in this chapter that's got me feeling all sentimental...
Handsome Devil chapter 19 . 7/5/2010
Oh man, this story is just so great. I have a HUGE calculus test that I know absolutely nothing about tomorrow, but I just can't seem to turn away from this. I was rooting for Avalon and Rowan the whole time!

As sorry as I feel for Dane, he was too superficial. He was just as manipulative as Rowan... wait, more. I couldn't see it working out. I mean, I don't know about Dane's circumstances and what made him that way but he didn't even care about getting close to Rowan. It was all pretty much physical for him. And even when it was physical, he barely cared when Rowan got all self-destructive. That's not even a physical relationship... it was no relationship really. Not even a friendship or a companionship. I mean, I would care if someone I knew was doing shit like that all the time.

Sorry Dane, it wasn't meant to be. And Dane and Rowan never had that chemistry Avalon and Rowan have. I can feel it sparking off the page during their scenes together. Haha.

Anyway, I love this story. I can't get enough. The summary does NOT do it justice. It made it seem like just another story, when this is not in fact, just another story, it's a rare gem. I'm glad to have found it. :)
arandm30 chapter 29 . 7/4/2010
Omg what an emotional roller coaster. It was an interesting change in content...A good one though. And it was good to see Chance and Dane in this chapter. I think they'd be such a cute couple. I was hoping there would be more of it. Please tell me something will happen between them soon because that would be so awesome! And hot! XD
celes101 chapter 29 . 7/4/2010
a great chapter! So, so much happened, certainly moved the story forward a lot.

thanks for the chapter, and the story in general.
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