Reviews for In the Valley
Archia chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I loved the beautiful picture it painted, and it was like a peaceful, simple place. Really nicely done. I like how it keeps the same structure in whole way. Great poem.
Freelancer Writer chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
What does it teaches us? It's just a picture? Work on it, explore love in the inside, you've described the outside only. It's just a tip, follow if you like.

Keep working on it
Malone chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Very descriptive, I like it.