MOOOOOOOOOWRREEEE!:D

I did!:P Sorry i'm being ultraaaa late to review.

Understatement. I've been SWAMPED _

I 3 thissss. :3

Ignore all those post about you needing to change your story. It is fine the way it is. You are the author not to other people.

Finish the original and post the revised under a different name.

Write more please!

The fact that she is only 14 and getting married, and most likely having sex, as the rating would have me believe, is a tad disturbing. You probably should have made her a bit older, 17 at least. Other than that, I think that the plot is interesting. I look forward to reading the rest to see how it all plays out.

I believe you should edit it rather than delete it. I like this story. If you want help, I'd be more than willing. .

Oh my Gosh I love your story please don't change it too much! maybe make Raven a little nicer to Alex...but then again her attitude is part of what makes it so awesome :) What ever you do I'll probably love it LOL Good Luck!

Please don't take this down ( I just started reading it and wont get finished for a while now ( ( ( ( (

Pertty please!

OKAY!(

I'd like to help :D

:P

It's a sweet moment, the way its written doesn't really show it. Also, don't get me wrong. I'm actually enjoying the story. It's just the inner editor in me pops out when I read something that can be improved.(Like my stories, yet for some reason I don't have time for them...)

I love tigers. I've always wanted one as a pet, but as as an aspiring biologist I have say they belong in the wild. Keeping them as pets IS dangerous even if they are trained. I did some work with tiger cubs at the Guangzhou Zoo in China and they can be dangerous when you play with them. I have a scar. Also, it isn't nice to keep them away from their family.

Why would you go swimming in a pool when you were just tortured?

Raven is so moody, that I can't keep up. Make the transitions between moods slower for the reader.