The first thing that popped into my mind was 'Mary Sue'

The main character is acting really bratty and I feel as if she is just a copy of yourself. You should show her distress in a more descriptive way and have her have some depth. Don't have her whine all the time. It won't do harm to include more details of her life, like family status. This story has promise, but you need to tone down the whining.

MORE PLEASE! and give me feedback on my new story?

Dude you can not just stop it there. I'm a new reader and I'm absolutely in love with this fic.

all the chapters are short and sweet but when are you going to update? I"m going crazy with the wait!

love this! more please?

this is an interesting plot, but its very awkwardly written. the characters all have mood swings, and the main character isn't written interestingly, i find myself despising her, not sympathizing. she's acting like a brat, but at the same time enjoying it. brattiness is usually a hard quality to deal with for main characters. it might help if this was written in third person, rather than having her thoughts, it might make her seem less self-absorbed.

Oh my goodness. I absolutely love this story!(: Can't wait for the next chapter,,

I would love to read more about Alex and Raven's relationship. I felt like you kind of went off, from the subject or summary. But it was a good story anyways. It was crazy I have to admit. heheheh. Anyways, I can't believe this is coming to an end. Hope there is a sequel with Alex and Raven again, hoping you telling us what they are up to after the got married. Update soon!

I need to re-read this lol im watching random videos on youtube :L charlieissocoollike...

Aw

YEAH

atleast you posted

Gr Post more. I LOVED ALL the chappies :D

This remind me so much of I Am Legend. hehehehhe. Anyways, hope you update soon! Would like to read more!

Haha :L