|Reviews for Dreamland|
| The Indifferent Voice of Youth chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Me again, i get the feeling I've read this before too, shouldve reviewed, i know! This is interesting. Do you suffer from insomnia? If so, to what degree? You've chosen your words very carefully, it seems. "Face the day with my eyes gouged out" is a provocative line.
And try to blindly find an escape route
One day I know I will see again
And when I do, I'll be me again
Those three lines especially one and three. Great poem