Reviews for Dreamland
The Indifferent Voice of Youth chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Me again, i get the feeling I've read this before too, shouldve reviewed, i know! This is interesting. Do you suffer from insomnia? If so, to what degree? You've chosen your words very carefully, it seems. "Face the day with my eyes gouged out" is a provocative line.

I love:

And try to blindly find an escape route

One day I know I will see again

And when I do, I'll be me again

Those three lines especially one and three. Great poem