Reviews for Star Born
xxxheartlandxxx chapter 28 . 7/26/2013
Ayame Yoshida chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
"Come children, I have candy in my van." That's what I thought of when I read the first line. They basically travel around in a pedo car. :P But good story, I really like it.
Bmonti chapter 28 . 8/30/2012
hey i just happen to stumble on this wonderful story :) loving it really i do its awsum i was wondering if you could maby give me a family tree of everyone cuz i kinda got lost on who's kid was who's that would be awsum please and do you have an idea of what Casie looks like and her starmate
Hayley Jade Alisdair chapter 26 . 7/10/2012
Called it! I so called it :) *does happy dance* great story so far, I like it a lot!
Angelbaby1991 chapter 28 . 5/29/2012
Great Story.
swords dragons and diet coke chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Damn! Great first chapter, you've done a really great job at grabbing the reader's attention :D
The Imagination Addict chapter 28 . 11/13/2011
so ive absolutely LOVED this. just a couple of comments. when ana tries to speak to her True Star, her star says not to be angry and that it will speak to her later. but it never does speak to her during the course of this story.

the other thing is that you introduced way too many names in the epilogue. i had to open a word document just to track who was whose kid. i get that you wanted to do a catch-up as well as set out the characters for the sequel, but it generally isn't a good idea to introduce so many names at one shot, and it's even worse to introduce new characters in the epilogue. new names are for beginnings, not endings. so that's something you might want to note for future books, if you don't plan to edit this.

well, im moving on to your sequel! xD btw, do you have any more Star books planned? or is this sequel the 4 books long?
The Imagination Addict chapter 11 . 11/13/2011
heehee you write some pretty hilarious stuff. it's not the usual over-the-top humour. just the way they interact... some of the stuff ana says...
conleyswifey chapter 28 . 6/19/2011
I really really enjoyed this story! I finally found the time to finish it. I can't wait to get started on the next one! Great job!
conleyswifey chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
ooo.. just found these stories. I like this one so far.
Samantha Walters chapter 28 . 3/15/2011
I've been looking for something really good to read for a few weeks now, and my best friend reminded me of this website (which I forgot about, because of school) I was really feeling down today beause my boyfriend broke up with me , and so I was looking for a good romance book to drown my sorrows and I must say this story made me so much happier at the end I found out the Ana had children and her and Tyce live happily ever after. The one thing I would really like to know is during the induction ceremony Ana contacted her star and it said she wasn't ready, it that going to me in the next book?

Thank you so much for posting this book I love it, and it really has made me happy :)

Lots of Love,

Cassadaga chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
Wo! Good ending! I'm not partial to endings where it flashes to the future and shows their kids-nothing against the way you wrote it or anything, it's just me. For some reason I can't relate to the characters as much when it's flashed forward and so much has happened that I don't know about, y'know?

Still, it was great. The only thing you might want to consider is the amount of children mentioned. It got a little confusing about who had what kid and so on.

ANYWAY, thank you for this story! It was very clever and, like I said, I'm jealous I didn't think of this plot line first! haha! I'm eager to start the sequel for sure!
Cassadaga chapter 25 . 12/2/2010
I meant to review for the last chapter...I thought it was very good! there was one part when you talked about her running towards their camp, and how she didn't even notice the twigs stabbing her palms. I liked that because it seemed believable-like if I was in that situation, I'd be oblivious to nuisances like that too.

As for this chapter, I also enjoyed it. I think the oracle might be Primo's starmate...? I'm also a bit confused on the whole prophecy. Ana hasn't really been spurned by Tyce, so does that mean she's not the right person? Is there someone else in the prophecy? Or was the prophecy just predicting that the one to come and CLAIM they'd been abandoned was the one who could lead them..? I don't know if that makes any sense ;)

I still liked it lots. On to the next chapter!
alL yOur dReAms chapter 28 . 11/29/2010
Hey! Okay, so I totally loved this story, especially the plot! Can't wait to read the sequel! xoxo
alL yOur dReAms chapter 27 . 11/29/2010
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