Reviews for Frigidity
Misstress Nicole chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
This piece was very enjoyable. I like the rhyme scheme. It was soft and powerful. It didn't feel forced and had a nice rythme that I could bod my head too. Your lines flowed beautifully into the next. I also like how every stanza end in you love being killed. It drove the point home and strenghtened the poem. There's nothing in this piece that stands out as needing to be fixed or changed. It's justly poetic just the way it is. Great job on this piece and thank you for sharing.