Eventually Nina will need to know about the stuff that Rokuda refuses to tell her. Interesting concept with the being tied to another person and fate and such.

I can seriously relate to Irie, because all I really think about is food. The first scene was really interesting...I'm hoping to see how it ties in with the rest of the story.

Sweet chappie. I liked how you wrote out the fight scene - short and to the point but easy to visualize. And I get a kick out of Rokuda, but that "need to know" crap could get on a person's nerves. :P And yet somehow that's what makes him cool.

Didn't seem rushed to me. You got a good pace going here. Can't wait for an update. :)

This was such a great chapter! I really got into the fight scene. They way you described it was amazing.

Cool, this is pretty interesting!

It's a good plot, how everything's supposed to go the way it's supposed to go, except for Nina.

The air of mystery that surrounds Rokuda and Shana is good, with all the 'need-to-know' business.

Overall, I think the story's excellent. Keep it up!

Aw man! What a way to end it! XD

Only complaint I can come up with is the use of parenthases(sp?) in fiction. They're not really needed and to be honest the description comment between them wasn't necessary.

But that's minor and me being nit-picky. :P

Aside from that, loving the story. I'm hooked. Look forward to an update. :)

I didn't expect that normal people couldn't see them. Very interesting way of bringing in that fact. Nice story too. I'll have to add "chocolate pudding" to my record of unusual and cute descriptions. _ Keep it up!

I'm liking this story so far, and I love your writing style!

So far, I'm wondering where this story is going, and it's really caught my interest! Please update soon!

Something tells me I'm going to really like Rokudo...

By the way, thanks for your reviews on my work!