Reviews for Of Isis and Osiris
Ravenouse Devourer chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
wow really good i like that myth. good rythm
William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
I love poetry about the old Gods, This is beautifully written!

I will definatly have to look over the rest of your works, I am very impressed!

RipplingEbbulience chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
The words have been strung beautifully...

Keep writing.

-Rippling Ebbulience
Punslinger chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Bravo! A virtuoso performance on a single rhyme theme. I think the only word you missed was "thighs."
Happy to be Mad chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
I think you told the story well. However The rhyming seems a bit forced.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Cool! Great story. What comes to mind is that line from the Bard's Hamlet "Murder most foul" (and I really hope that's Hamlet and not MacBeth)