Reviews for the coroner takes a bow
speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
the rhyming in this is perfect. this is a really strong poem, you have great control of your words.
Isca chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
"A bear turned into a smoking jacket." This line is like a Dali painting; how wonderfully surreal!

"The dust became stars." Beautiful.

"A hurdy gurdy." Man singin' songs of love. ;)

"Junoesque." Creative descriptive word. Nice allusion too.

I also like the repetition of the line: "This is my movie." It's both creepy and thought-provoking.
Happy Cereal chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Wow, the beat and rhyme scheme is amazing! Very lyrical, this a really striking poem. Love it!