Reviews for Asylum
Lady Kiri chapter 2 . 2/20/2010
Hallie is a brave woman. What a way to treat a stranger who saved your life

The opening bathtub scene was very vivid. I thought along the lines of 'wtf?'(Good way) and 'this is interesting' when the water began to boil and lightbulbs began popping.

I'm curious to learn more about Edgar and Hallie

Until next time

Lady Kiri
naito-kun chapter 2 . 2/1/2010
gosh i'm so sorry i only got around to reviewing this now, anyway i love the whole revenge thing (haha am a sucker for stuff like that) but i'm a little confused about who hallie is O: and i loved the whole water and fire thing you did in chapter one.
dfw chapter 2 . 1/29/2010
I like your way of describing things. It is certainly special from what I've read so far, really. I look forward to your next chapters. Love your work! XD
Lady Kiri chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
I love your use of imagery. After the first paragraph, I was hooked. I will definitely be reading again.

I didn't check your summary, so I don't know if you review those who review you. Anyway, I've a story that I'd like you to review.