Alright, this chapter is good. Now, I'm left wondering whether or not Kasey IS schizophrenic.

The only thing I'd suggest for your past two updates is exactly as you'd suspect-Jordan needs more character development. Not so much action; he has plenty of that to work with. What you need to get into is his motivation; you know, what he wants, why he does the things he does. There have to be reasons behind the man that don't involve other people; that's what I'm saying. Otherwise, you're golden. :)

These are some nice updates, keep them coming!

It's turning out great! Just keep going. I LOVE it.

Nice introductions to Dean and Eli. Also, nice editing to Mila's introduction. :) No one here cares if you swear, by the way. It's human.

"To defy reality is like telling the richest man he lives with no boundaries. Or telling a deft and intelligent scientist that his inventions will never surpass a wild society. It’s useless. It’s a pain in the ass, and it does not lift your dreams out of its dazed state and make it your wondrous life."

This paragraph makes little sense. It is a weak opening to an important character. Either you should explain more, or say what you want to say differently.

Otherwise, great start to an interesting story!

I think this story could be great, and it could have a lot of substance, but I remember "Eli Stone" being a television series. Perhaps a slight name change is in order? :)

this has the best begining i've read in years!