Reviews for Adolescent
actualXreality chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
First off... hi. You're laying next to me, but I'm making you not look! Haha! Anyway, next. Poem. Amazing. I've alwaqys loved your writing style. You know that. I love the line spacing,and your use of parentheses. (I love that word. parentheses. It's like the word... I don't know. I can't get distracted...) And I like your punctuation usage (Is usage a word? I think it is.) in general. Your similes are amazing (Ex. col wind whistling through vowels and punctuation crying life, like the Bidwell Ghost) (Side note: At this point in the review, you literally just flopped on the bed.) [Side note #2: Your hair is so STRAIGHT!] I adore the way you write, it's so great. Your poems are so dark, but that's what makes them so fascinating! You always seem to find the right words to express the emotion you want to express. It's not crystal clear, but that's what I like about your points. They make the reader think about what you're trying to say. And that makes your poems memorable. And that's good! :D This review has gone on for far too long, so I'm going to end it... for now. What I could've just said, although it would've been far too boring was "I adore this poem and all of your poems in general and I hope I still get to read your poems and tell you how much I love them when' we're, like, thirty. And older!" Soo... I think you're getting bored, so I'm going to tell you that I'm done now! D Love you