Reviews for Fallen |
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![]() ![]() Where can I find your book 'Risen' so I can find out what happened to Angel and Karina? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Some of the chapters were weaker than others, but hey you need chapters like that. Can't wait for the second book! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did not expect that twist! Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! Angel seems really concerned for her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start here. The preface really caught my attention. I feel ready bad for Karina. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved Fallen and can hardly wait for the sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really interesting. I think that, from all that stories that I've read on Angels, this was on of the best interpretations of them. The story was sweet, funny, sad, suspenseful and amayzing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing! I'm jealous of how modern you can be, I can't do the modern mix very well:/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() THE WHOLE STORY IS BRILLIANT PLEASE POST A NOTE WHEN YOU UPDATE RISEN |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could you post a note when you upload the sequel?(: soooooooo curious abit Karina's name! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omggggg! I loved this story! Ur a really great writer! When is Risen going to come out? It has a summary in ur bio its still not thereee!its been a year, when r ya going to write itttttt! HURRRY UPPP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The paragraph that starts, "What about my face do you find funny," isn't written in first person like the rest of your book. I like what you've written so far! |
![]() ![]() I know I've probably written a review or some form of feedback for this chapter but I come back to your story to gain solace. You misspelled choked twice. Above. Sincerely, Leland. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ToT NOU *clicks to readmoar* |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'd be annoyed with him, too! as an angel, it must be very serious for him to sin. not knowing Shakespeare is a SIN! *sobs dramatically* hehe |