wowww. , that was um, something. Seriously though, I enjoyed it

Whatever ending I was expecting was definitely NOT this.

isn't she nice. haha i wish this wasn't a one-shot

... oh my god.

I like this a lot. Well written, a good pace, and it shows what us guys have always thought of women deep down - they are evil when they want to be!

Spawnt

love it. its different from you other stuff but that makes it interesting!

Should I be scared?

LOL i loved that! that was so fucking hilarious...

i love how different the tone of this one-shot is to your other stories...very mysterious! :) kinda reminds me of the poem "salome" by Carol Ann Duffy. keep it up! ]

very different, but not bad.

hahah!evil:)

Wow. That was awesome :D I really liked this one! Good work!

An interesting one-shot, to say the least. And your summary is very correct; it's not what you usually write, but it's still pretty good! It seems like this could be worked into a full-fledged story, but it does just fine as a one-shot as well.

One of the best things about it, I think, is the mystery you put in it, plus we don't even know what the stripper's name is. It kind of just keeps you guessing, which is great!

Great job on the one-shot!

OMG this was amazing!

awesome! loved the twist, noticed it was complete on the story info thing, why? it would have been such an awesome story, please carry on, i miss updates from u and this story isnt like all the others its not cliche (not that i dnt like a cliche story but a change is nice aswell) anyways loved it, and the main girls character!