Reviews for Two Grand
craziebabe45 chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Oh, nice twist on the stripper business! Haha...it made me laugh when I got to the end. You kept it moving well and it was an easy read. Good one shot!
readaholicxxx chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
woah..that was unexpected-I like this story it's different
Jevanminx chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
That's amazing, the twist on it is brilliant.

JM
Hypa To Hell And Back chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Wow that was pretty cool. I liked it. Certainly different but very interesting.
MidnightRythm1990 chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Haha and this is a one-shot? This is could turn into a kickass (excuse my Spanish) story. Throw in a hot cop/dectective, a jealous bouncer, the crazy mom who knows her daughter's a stripper but not a killer, the best friend who keeps her secrets and maybe somewhere hidden in the background, a little girl. Give the stripper an innocent but deadly nature with a coy smile, and it's a golden ROMEO and JULIET where Juliet's a stripper with the Midas touch and Romeo's a illfated officer... haha sorry this was so good it got me onto a rant...

Anyways Brava Brava! Three cheers for Bree... as usual :p
RaynaSadie chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
i read this last night like, straight after you published it because i have you on author alert Lol. I didn't have time too review so i thought i should now. I'm currently in ICT at school so if the reviews a little bit shit sorry lol (: Full court press is and always will be my all time faveourite story out of books and fictionpress works, and this is nothing like it ... I LOVE IT. Its different from everything else you've written.. it would have been good if you'd have continued it.. i was kinda shocked at the end because .. you built it up so well! OH GOD MR O'NEIL'S COMING AH TEACHER GOTTA GO (: keep at it ... any one shots orr sequals too Full Court Press?
flowingypsy chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
I never expected that to happen, she's crazy but that is a good plan to make money. Are we ever going to see Bark again or is there another story coming?
hezja chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
hel i wasnt expecting that,, but well written xx
castiel89 chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
OMG! So at the end of this, it completely reminded me of an episode of Criminal Minds! I love that show! And honestly, I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did! So congrats on making me go "bree wrote what?"

Short and entertaining. Two thumbs up!
silver sky memories chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
I loved it. it's awesome and definitely a fresh idea. the way you tell it is prefect. too bad we don't know her name. and that it's only a one-shot this definitely has potentional to be an amazing full-length story.
RK96 chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
wow. i didnt expect that ending. it was really good! totally unexpected and definetly shows girl power! alot difernt from your usual stuff which i liked. great job
AmoreJess chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
I really like this. I'd probably like it even more if it turns into a whole story..hint hint. haha Awesome job on this, well it's not surprising at all, all of your stories are awesome.
abbychar chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
damn. Girl power! :P
JUST ReLAX chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
I found this story sort of funny. Very clever.
summers-end chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Woah, creepy. I like it. Especially the part with the "Would it surprise you..." The first question surprised me. The second question threw me and made me think. Isn't she ever worried that the backstage guards will see her leave with someone and know? Or has she done this long enough to know she won't get caught? How did she even fall into it? Man, I really wanna know the back-story on this girl!

Oh and we should talk soon about more beta-ing :)

summers-end
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