Reviews for can't fix yesterday
she left ringing in his head chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
you've left me speechless .. amazing.
Mister Bo Jangles chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
I really like the feeling that this evokes, and I think you captured it with the worlds well. However, I got kind of thrown off by the lack of rhyming or steady rhythm in the 2nd and 3rd stanzas, and the 5th stanza sounds incomplete without rhyme or a defined rhythm. I really like the first stanza, as well as the 4th, 6th, and 7th. Well done!