Reviews for The King's Groom
bookaholic13 chapter 11 . 6/5/2010
for a king, Mareks a W-U-S-S! lol
K.S.T.M chapter 11 . 5/31/2010
I do believe that both Kole and Marek are idiots! Hope you update soon!xD
Malachi2223 chapter 11 . 5/28/2010
Thanks for the update. It was good to see that Kano was okay after all. It was very short though and a long time in coming. Please post another chapter soon.
Siren of the Darknessflame chapter 11 . 5/27/2010
loved the fic update soon. it would be nice to see some inner confirmaton of some solid emotions between marek and kole instead of them just dancing aroung eachother but over all this is an awesome beginning and i can't wait to see how you develop the plot.
Esquirella chapter 11 . 5/27/2010
It looks like it will take a hell of a lot of trickery to get Marek and Kole to admit they have feelings for each other. Luckily, Kano is still alive to try again. LOL! Good update!
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 10 . 5/4/2010
Like a love potion would be green :) Love it~! (Go Kano, trying to be a matchmaker :D please don't die!)
bookaholic13 chapter 10 . 5/3/2010
hey no worries, i liked the ending. :)
xoxlizzie chapter 10 . 4/21/2010
Excellent as usual! Keep going, I really love this! I can't believe Kano saved Kole from drinking the potion! I thought for sure Kano would be happy about Kole drinking it...You seem to be full of surprises! Fantastic job, I am really excited to see what shall happen next! :)
Nastusia chapter 10 . 4/19/2010
. . . . I hope that plan of Kano's will help benefit Kole as well. I hope Kano's is okay even though I'm sure he is and that's just the potion's sideffects?

Eh? At least you updated! I can't wait to see what the effects are.
Malachi2223 chapter 10 . 4/18/2010
Very good so far! I'm excited to see what will happen with Kano. I hope he will be okay, it would be sad if he died. I also hope that they don't go too hard on Clarisse since she didn't intend to harm anyone. I wonder who the mystery guy was that gave her the potion.

The consistent errors I saw in most of the chapters were the mix up of wonder and wander. You wander the halls and wonder which way to go. There was a mix up of seem and seam and a few other homonyms.

This story is moving along well, the pace is really good, and the plot is unfolding in a clear and concise manner. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Kyrum no Tsubarashii chapter 10 . 4/18/2010
Agaian, wonderful chapty!

This is one of the best stories i've read in a long time!

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Esquirella chapter 10 . 4/18/2010
I really like Kano now. But what did that potion do to him?
Malachi2223 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Hey there Panda!

I finally got around to reading your story. I've finished the first chapter and it was enough to make me want to continue reading, which is a good thing!

I noticed a couple of obvious errors that I thought you would want to know about, so I'm going to tell you.

The first one was the word fallow...its supposed to be follow. 'He said, follow me upstairs.'

Fallow is a different word, it means; unseeded after plowing or currently inactive but with the possibility of activity or use in the future.

The other error I noticed was with a characters name. At first you called him 'Laban' but then you started calling him 'Lanan', I wasn't sure if you decided to change his name or if it was some kind of mistake, so I figured that I'd let you know so you could fix it in whatever way you chose.

So far I'm really enjoying this story. I think your characters are interesting and the plot is intriguing. I'll comment again occasionally as I move through the chapters.
K.S.T.M chapter 10 . 4/18/2010
Will Kano e alright, they won't blame Kole will they? Hope you update soon!xD
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