Reviews for The King's Groom
TunglMed chapter 5 . 2/18/2010
woo still a great story, i like how its unfolding. and hows its not completely predictable and unorigional, but er.. yes very origional!haha sorry about that.. mean it tho ;)

do carry on...

xoxlizzie chapter 5 . 2/17/2010
I love this story so much!Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens!
Nastusia chapter 5 . 2/15/2010
The ending was okay. It didn't feel weird. At least, not to me. Can't wait for the next update, yus!

KolexMarex Forever! They're my favorite couple of all your stories. I just have a soft spot for Kole. Aw. C:

Kole baby, cheer up! If you want to be a man then just take your marriage like a man.
PyroTech chapter 5 . 2/15/2010
yay cool chapy I like how you don't just jump right into their relationship with each other, let their feelings develope and they don't just magically appear like alot of other authors do. Can't wake for the next one
PyroTech chapter 4 . 2/12/2010
heh I hope you update soon! That was great
PyroTech chapter 2 . 2/12/2010
ahahaha! Marriage! That's great! hehe
00000000000000000000000000000 chapter 4 . 2/8/2010
WOW! AWESOME KISS! Can't wait for you to write a smutty chapter, your so descriptive!

Please do continue to update _
00000000000000000000000000000 chapter 2 . 2/8/2010
So glad you updated! I love stories in a...sandy dessert/Egyptian setting _

btw small typo at the very top :

And it seamed, he wouldn’t be for a while.

-I believe you meant "seemed" _ Sorry, I"m OCD :P

I really love how descriptive you were with the room and fabrics, I could really visualize everything!

Now to go check out the story u suggested _
xoxlizzie chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Love it! I apsolutely LOVE it!
Nastusia chapter 4 . 2/8/2010
F-I admire your skills.

:V Because you like him, Kole. That's why. He's just too cool that you can't resist his charms.
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
Love it :D Kole will just have to survive with be married to the gorgeous king Marek... :D
Nastusia chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
Oh, come on, Kole. You know you want to. /WIGGLES EYEBROWS AT
Nastusia chapter 2 . 1/31/2010
Kole don't worry. Sooner or later you'll find out that you are actually very lucky. C:

Can't wait to read moar. :3
Kat chapter 2 . 1/31/2010
Very interesting. Can't wait until the next chapter is up :)
mwaha chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
Wow! What an interesting idea! Update soon I am getting an account on here soon i think...
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