woo still a great story, i like how its unfolding. and hows its not completely predictable and unorigional, but er.. yes very origional!haha sorry about that.. mean it tho ;)

do carry on...

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I love this story so much!Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens!

The ending was okay. It didn't feel weird. At least, not to me. Can't wait for the next update, yus!

KolexMarex Forever! They're my favorite couple of all your stories. I just have a soft spot for Kole. Aw. C:

Kole baby, cheer up! If you want to be a man then just take your marriage like a man.

yay cool chapy I like how you don't just jump right into their relationship with each other, let their feelings develope and they don't just magically appear like alot of other authors do. Can't wake for the next one

heh I hope you update soon! That was great

ahahaha! Marriage! That's great! hehe

WOW! AWESOME KISS! Can't wait for you to write a smutty chapter, your so descriptive!

Please do continue to update _

So glad you updated! I love stories in a...sandy dessert/Egyptian setting _

btw small typo at the very top :

And it seamed, he wouldn’t be for a while.

-I believe you meant "seemed" _ Sorry, I"m OCD :P

I really love how descriptive you were with the room and fabrics, I could really visualize everything!

Now to go check out the story u suggested _

Love it! I apsolutely LOVE it!

F-I admire your skills.

:V Because you like him, Kole. That's why. He's just too cool that you can't resist his charms.

Love it :D Kole will just have to survive with be married to the gorgeous king Marek... :D

Oh, come on, Kole. You know you want to. /WIGGLES EYEBROWS AT

Kole don't worry. Sooner or later you'll find out that you are actually very lucky. C:

Can't wait to read moar. :3

Very interesting. Can't wait until the next chapter is up :)

Wow! What an interesting idea! Update soon I am getting an account on here soon i think...