Very good beginning.

Wonderful story, so very wonderful. Though Kole's stubbornness made me raged couple of times, I still adore and love him. Marek, ohhhh, sexy man, I just love him, his personality, everything described about him, he is just amazing. It progressed so much, lol, where Kole went from a just-got-out-of-college boy to a king's-groom, lots has happened, if I were Kole, I don't know how I would have reacted, but if it were to be with a sexiness like Marek, I would accept whatever. Tal's gender thing suprised me but I guess it's for the better since now Kano has someone, and vice versa. Even if this was fiction, I still hope for Kole and Marek's love to last a very long time.

Wow. I know this "I suddenly realized I was gay" trope is common, but I am always put off when a person seems to shed their displeasure too quickly. In this case, the mic doesn't seem inclined to enjoy the adventure or feel grateful, yet he gets turned on instead of angry at a surprise public kiss by a stranger? would you not be angry, even if it was someone you could otherwise find attractive? Especially if the person is showing zero regard for your feelings and opinions? It makes the character seem wishy washy and without personality.

Oh you poor uke you, angst isn't good for your soul!

Heh. Hormones bitch.

I absolutely loved this...I usually am not a fan of long chaptered stories but once I got into this I couldn't stop reading. Can't wait to see how ur sequel will go. :D

Loved it! A really good story!

You are a very talented writer. I was literally half tempted to read past 3 in the morning but non the less my sleepiness got the best of me. I love the characters and you have a really pleasant mood to the story. Can't wait to read more. And mind you this story stole my attention away from wondering my imagination and a marathon of new episodes of my favorite shows so I personally think its an amazing story worthy of praise!

More please. - Sounds awesome!

it's been a while since I've read this story. I shall reread it.

This is such a beautiful, different story. Bravo! This I will read over and over. Thank You! I'm off to read the next one. Write a series, ok?

Came back to read it again. Much enjoyed : )

It appears that I haven't reviewed this story yet which is a shame because I really enjoyed reading it. I like the bumps in their relationship and the eventual acknowledgement of Kole and Marek's feelings for one another.

Tallie a boy? That was something that I didn't expect. I am glad that Tallie and Kano did eventually end up with one another. It would have been sad if Kano did marry Kole. Speaking of which (I understand that you addressed his thoughts in the story) but didn't Kole stop to think that Kano's chance to fall in love was also being taken away?

How was the trip to Antequem? Will Kano and Tal be able to marry? Thanks for the read.

The villain was also pretty obvious to me based on the classified information he knew at the beginning that Kole himself thought it was strange for him to know. I've been waiting for him to reveal himself; the author did a good job making the villain logical if unsurprising.

This was enjoyable; however, I wish we had a chance to learn more about the characters. We didn't get any background information like what their lives were before they met each other or why Kole never even thought about going home (did he have no friend or family?).