Reviews for The King's Groom
Frankinscence chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
This is really well done. I like the story a lot so far but you really need to go over these chapters you have up and edit them.

Fallow is land plowed and left unseeded for a season or not in use. You use this a lot when I think you mean to put 'Follow'.

This is such a great idea and I love the style in which you write but all of the spelling errors and incorrect homophones just stab me in the heart.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/12/2012
Kano drinks something then he collapses and Kole answers "I don't know"? He is such an idiot...I really wish he'd get killed or something.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/12/2012
No wonder Kole was a loser in his own world - he's really an idiot.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/12/2012
Why is Kole an idiot?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/3/2012
hello, um.. May i ask u smethng.. Can i draw this story into a manga? Its very interesting, and im serious.
AH chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
back to reread. i notice several mistakes that’r too repetitive to be considered as typos. one of them is sore/sour/soar. i believe you mistook one to the other u know. u use sour instead of sore more than once. i think while the pronunciation sounds quite similar, their written forms’r way different :)
SpazticCat chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Just found this story and it seems pretty interesting so far, and well written, too, but for the spelling errors. "Its" is possessive; "it's" means "it is." Follow is following someone; fallow I've only ever seen used as a description for an untended or barren field... And a "pail" is something you carry water in, while "pale" refers to pastel or lighter colors. I have no idea if you're still active on here, but just so you know for the future. c:

Now to continue reading...
bell13 chapter 18 . 5/31/2012
Such a nice and sweet story. Thank you very much for it!
Sayure chapter 15 . 5/16/2012
I don't know how but from the first time TeriCano talked to Kole I was sure he was the sorcerer and was more convinced with the next chapters. Great story
JJ chapter 16 . 4/20/2012
That was incredibly beautiful...(big sigh & even bigger smile)!
Imaltht chapter 5 . 4/19/2012
You have a beautiful way with words, I am in awe...
JJ chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
That was a real exciting start, hooked me for sure.
dividends chapter 13 . 4/1/2012
hey, ive read this story like a bazillion times, and it just gets better and better as i read it. why hasnt it got a bazillion reviews you ask? bcos you'd get sick of my comments, that's why. high praise, my friend, high praise. just imagine ficpress geting jammed up with my reviews if i did, k? that's how many.

anyhoo, i was wondering somethig - where do you get your names? i mean, kikuchi and then marek and kole - they sound like they come from completely different countries, or are they made up?

excellent writing. i read your stories like pandas eat bamboo.

thats probably not a great analogy. i read other stories too, but i like yours best? yeah. that's the one. i meant that. XD
keya17 chapter 18 . 2/25/2012
I loved it. Im so glad I read this it was a really interesting story:)
Oshini chapter 18 . 12/29/2011
Aw, this story was just too cute! I loved all the drama in it, and the world you described sounds so AMAZING! And so peaceful, and happy, and just downright AWESOME! I'm glad there was a happy ending for both Kano and Tal, too. I liked the little extra at the end of the story :D
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