Absolutely fabulous.

It was heart wrenching and heart warming at he same time. You turned an over used plot idea into something truly spectacular. I can not see why his story does not have more attention. If this was for sale in a bookstore I would buy it in a heartbeat.

someone must draw this... perhaps submit it to suBLime?

Goodness. I cannot believe it's over. I enjoyed every word. Even if your thirteenth chapter made me sob my brains out. This will definitely remain one of my top favorites c:

Goodness, this chapter is amazing. So many emotions. Its like every character needs their own story, they're so multifaceted.
I love this story so much.

OH, I KNEW it. That tricky little minx! Brilliant, yet heartbreaking :/ Good luck to Chitose..

AAAAHHHH! OHGOODNESS, TELLHIM D;

Goodness. So many blurred lines and repressed feelings.
Is Chitose trying to make sure he's worth the owner's love? I'll find out c:

O.O Damn. That's the kind of power one should really fear.

OHMYGOD! So it was the owner that bid? :D MMNNN can't wait to see where this goes c:

I am literally SOBBING. That was so painful to read. So heartbreaking.
That poor man. God.
I don't even know what to say! Just so hurt over this.

Wonderful writing.

How in the world did this only get thirty seven reviews?
My goodness! I'm always on the edge of my seat, I love this so much. If this story were a movie, I'd be watching it once a day c: I'd be quoting from it.
So well written. I love it.

Hi!

I'm not gonna lie to you; this was an absolute bitch to read through. Not that it was badly written, but it was very long. And at the risk of sounding like a whiny fifth grader that has to read books for English class, on a school day when you have to focus on uni, and preferably only that, it's not a good idea to read such a long story.

Loved it anyhow.

Purry love,
lovebird17

that’s an awesome read. it so didn’t deserve the lack of reviews it currently has. awh. it’s somewhat bittersweet -but painfully true irl- that after all the things kazuya had done he’d never able to get rid chitose off takahiro’s heart completely. love this :D

Beautiful ending for a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing this with us!

I'm never much of a reviewer, but this chapter really really really really deserves praise. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.