I'm extremely interested in seeing where this is going!

I like it!

please update soon.

-Lain :]

Hey Sis!

I really like your story so far. It kind of reminds me of some that I have worked on, but has never finished (lol). May I suggest watching your punctuation? Other than maybe one mistake, you did a very good job. Just make sure youn let everyone know exactly what Myles and Ash look like. Good Job Baby Sis! Welcome to the General side of FP!

Your Bro, Silver Sooner!