Reviews for Time Machine
Thenardier chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
It's nice to read something with a moral, and it's even better when the poem is written beautifully.
sealednectar chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Really good. Almost like a fable. People regret so many things in life. I liked the ending of this poem. Teaches a lesson.

Well done.
Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
This is really clever and told in that folklawish moral story way.

The message is simple and well put across, the flow is perfect.

Great work!
January Skies chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Nice, and quite true. People really shouldn't worry so much.
LittlePieceLove chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Wow I loved it.!

It tells me that everything happens for a reason, good or bad.

Very clever.! :)