Reviews for Happiness
melodyrose9 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Cute!
arcianking112 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
very nice, short sweet and it makes you think.
sealednectar chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
This was so lovely. It was really beautiful! The ending made me smile.

Keep writing.
mixed up mess chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Apart from some tiny punctuation mistakes, I thought it was amazing. I like the description, especially how you managed to fit the word bitterness in and the poem is thought provoking and beautiful

:)
Punslinger chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
A very lovely, well-written poem showing how we can help other people just by being ourselves. The last line is quite touching.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
"How do you do it? Living each day." Wow. I love this opening line; the angsty tone here is palpable.

Concrit: I'd space the words better (e.g. some words are stuck to the commas where they shouldn't be). I'd also make little stanzas.

Keep writing. :)