Reviews for Man in the Shadows
Anna Cate chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
What a beginning! You definitely have the reader's attention with that first line. What body? Who was that man? Who's Mindy? What's going to happen next? Great story so far!
him chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
wow that was cool! i'd probably say to just slow down a little, because everything seems to move quite quickly, but i guess you could say that in a positive way too! awesomeness!

May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This left me curious about what would happen next. It's nice to see you posting here again. I used to be Raven Tiger.
Briony Lancaster chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
It's interesting, your description creates a strong visual image, without being too long-winded. It's instantly more engaging than my story, I think I might have to try and follow your example.

I'd love to see more.

I'm sorry I couldn't write a longer review, I can't think of much other than "exciting"!