|Reviews for Kissing You And The Rest|
| annayh44 chapter 1 . 8/25
New Year Resolution lol. . .the one shot was amazing. .i like it!
| Julietish chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, a judge wrote this review for it: Stories like this are the reason why I love fiction. In fiction, you can do things that you wouldn't do in real life. As Daniel Tosh (who is a jerk) once said, "If I wanted to watch people doing things that were possible, I'd go outside." I mean, obviously it's good for stories to be realistic, but personally, I don't think a good story is altogether probable.
Kissing You And The Rest is about Clover, a girl who plays it safe with the whole "love" thing. Her New Year's resolution was to kiss every black-haired green-eyed guy she sees in the next fourteen hours. So, she sets off to the mall with her best friend Caroline and attempts to do just that. She does surprisingly well, kissing five guys before her friend Jack comes along, who (spoiler alert) has black hair and green eyes.
Obviously, the plot is pretty unrealistic. What girl in her right mind would go around kissing strangers who look like Harry Potter (the book version)? Furthermore, why does she see so many guys with black hair and green eyes? I don't think that's a very common combination. But she does, and Sparkling Acrobat somehow makes it seem believable. The dialogue is pretty realistic, as are the descriptions. The narration is original and entertaining. It's a good length, too; just under 3,200 words, which is short enough to keep your attention yet long enough to sufficiently tell the story. It would be nice if it had a bit more character development, though-I found it hard to care about Clover and Jack. Still, Kissing You And The Rest was a cute, fluffy read that comes with high recommendations from me.
| my princess ending chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
These are the types of couples that will last forever, I can tell. They always entertain each other and I'd love to read more about them.
| Kildosad chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Really cute. Not much of a reviewer, but this is sho fluffeh I had to say something! :) 3
| Seph Meadowes chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Cute. Great job.
| Being a Geek and Lovin' It chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Awe! That was so cute. Your a great writter!
| Flashography chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
awwwwwwww, this was so cute !
ahahh lovely new years reso, plus i am in love with black hair green eyed guys ; )
| theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Ahh I love it!
| M0jojojo chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Your characters are AWESOME. I really enjoy being in their heads:D
| Hypa To Hell And Back chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
It was cute, maybe I should do that sort of thing, I might find love that way or at least a decent guy who isn't a right ... Anyway before I rant on too long that was really cute and fun to read. Well done
| Bubbly Girl chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Super cute and unique! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
| TheMoltenWindow chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
| ClaryLovesYouXD chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
i luvv dis n dis actually happened 2 mi cuzo it was aswome cause she's kissin random dudes n im laffn at her
| SittingOnCornflakes chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Life is indeed such a pain. It's hard to find one-shots that don't make me beg for more or feel like a cliff-hanger.
Heh, that story made my night. Big time. It completely coated all the bad vibes i've been having. I don't know why but it made my smile. I like how light it is. Not too cliche or too mushy. Just right.
| SheRomantic4EverLove chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I don understan. Why u arent moré campus around here! La verdad que no lo entiendo escribes mejor que muchos que tienen miles de reviews. Que vergüenza para América jajajaja me enamoran tus historias absolutamente! One shot son lo tuyo pero honestamente no has Intentado convertir un one shot en una historia pq son increíblemente buenisismos y te lo digo tengo muchísima esperienxia en este website y eres una de las mejores :). espero que mas y mas gente lean tus one shots. Todos son preciosos pero mi favorito es roamantic novel demon.