Aw, this is such a cute story :)

I love it, I think it's really sweet while still being nice and naughty xD

Sweet. and Simple. :D

i really liked this one too

:-)

nvm about my Dan/Edan comment. i get it now...sorry

This is very, very, very excellent. The way you define the two characters is wonderful, not like most people do. Like you had been telling me, the characters have two totally different personalities and you can definately tell. Eli seems to be the one who knows a little more (as stated) and Zeke seems... Well... Innocent...ish.

The plot line is also very good. Very subtle, yet descriptive. Zeke is the church boy, correct?

I really wish this wasn't just a one shot. It seems like it could escalate to a very, very good full on story.