good story (I started reading it today...), but you should be more descriptive and you could put more things into one chapter. Did you realise that it took you four chapter for ONLY the first day of school? Honestly, if I had read this story chapter per chapter, waiting for updates, I would have stopped, because the single chapter are uneventful.

I'm not flaming you, and I hope you don't feel offended, but I want you to know that you could do so much better. I can tell.

Also, you should be careful with the apostrophes. Remember that "you're" and "your" are not the same. And also with the negative forms, like "can't". They may seem little things, but if a story doesn't have good spelling, it is not really a good one.

Anyways... hope you take in my advice on everything and please update ASAP; I'll subscribe ;) And if you need any help, feel free to send me an e-mail.

P.S.: The plot is really good, and it was great how Andi told Lucas about her powers :)

Hahaha! Writers block sucks! The ONLY way to get rid of it is brainstorm, or get idea's from others and those ideas will inspire you...

Anyways the story is great! I simply love the plot and it is now a fav! I Hope writters block dosn't cloud your mind for long! You have a very creative mind!

my idea for the story is that since they are both together and they have powers, it might affect their own powers and maybe Andi would have trouble blocking out thoughts and maybe Lucas will have some trouble going invincable. Or maybe somthing good will happen and they will gain something from being together?

That suggestion above was just to help with the writters block! I hope it isn't too confusing! I ramble to much! ANYWAYS! yeah... whatever happens in this story I will love it! and thats the honest truth!

see you in the next chapter!

KAITLYN

K.I.T

xOxo

I hate writer's block when it happens to me . I swear it is like a disease sometimes. I know how you feel. Although for having writer's block I still thought it was good.

Take your time with the chapters.I will wait as long as it takes .I don't want you to feel rushed .There are some readers who are so demanding of getting chapters right away .I am not one of those .

Anyways , I really like how it is going so far .I hope to see more .I hope you get all the reviews you may need or want.

Good Job

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Good luck

Haha I love this story! I don't normally reveiew on the first chapter when there is chapters ahead of it... but wow! I totally love this story Idea! Such a creative mind you have! I congratulate you! I am hooked! I will now read the other chapters! :D

See you in the next chapter!

KAITLYN

K.I.T

xOxO

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! keep up the awesome :D

writemr please? I LOVE THIS

omg it's awesome

i love itt )

you've got to update son

kay? ]

i love lucas and andi

they're so perfect together

he's so...pure )

anyway

thanks so much

PLEASEPLEASE update

Awesome chaps cant wait for more!

I think it is good, they aren't moving to fast. I like it that he knows she can read minds now.

I love it don't slow them down please! :)

It does seem a bit too fast , but then again they connect on a deeper level ( I think ).

But other than that it still is good the way they are going .

Anyways , I really like this story .

Good Job

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Good Luck

I really liked this chapter! Hope you update soon.

I so can't wait for the next one!

I love the story .

I hope you update this weekend .

If you can't you can't .

Good job

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Good luck

I actually thought about that whole extraordianry thing yesterday! lol. good chapter!

I never even noticed the word extraordinary! that's soo cool. :) But I love the chapter but wish it could be a little longer. haha update!