|Reviews for over me|
| arrhythmias chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
'my mouth still wants to say your name./ my legs still walk in sync with yours walking away.'
i just love the wording. it's powerful, in a very subtle way.
| slowxromance chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
This really brought tears to my eyes. Wow. It was so moving and touching, and the way you painted it was beautiful. I really enjoyed it. I think it's a situation almost anyone can relate to. Great job.
| she left ringing in his head chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
this is everything i'm feeling right now. you took the words right from my mouth.
"my mouth still wants to say your name."
| amongst the sunflowers chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
i love this. it sounds like a familiar feeling that most can relate to. well done :]
| the art of being obsolete chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
I like the gentle rhymes and how utterly simple this seems. good job.
| Mister Bo Jangles chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I love it. It captures the sense of attraction and longing really well, even if that person has moved on. As for the structure, I REALLY like how the first line rhymes, and I like the rhythm of the first stanza. And I like the "legs walking in sync" line, that's great. Well done :)
| St. Valentine chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
This is beautiful. Bravo!